yay, unofficial Date!!!  And I am glad Ginny get over the shock very quickly.

I especially love the last part - hehe, love to see Draco being jealous of Harry again :D

Author's Response: Aw, when is he not? When is he not?

omg, this is so good so far. i hope that harry and ginny break up soon. i have a feeling that harry is cheating on ginny with hermione. if that's the case, i think draco should be the one to find out and tell ginny. and then the two of them could be together. and nothing is more amazing than that. :) Anyways, loved this chapter, ad please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks to Incognito's speedy beta services the next chapter is already in queue :)

Lovely chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm glad Ginny didn't throw too much of a hissy fit when she saw Draco, and it's rather nice to see the two of them getting along in person. I have to admit, I cracked up myself at Draco's explanation of why the girl didn't work out.

I don't usually beta for people, but if no one offers to help with the other chapters, I can do it for you. Think of me as your last resort. ^_~

Author's Response:

Haha, I was laughing while writing it :) I was afraid people would be disappointed that Ginny didn't throw more of a fit, :P I'm glad everyone agrees that this is more realistic.

Thank you so much for the offer <3 I currently have 3 girls fighting over the position, so I suppose I should let one of them do it :P You're sweet for offering though :) 

Aww I love it! I have a feeling Hermione and Harry are involved in some way - either romantically or they're keeping a secret together... can't wait to find out!

Author's Response: Well aren't you observant? Don't think on it too much, Hermione is happily dating Ron atm :)

i have a question. What do you mean by paragraph placement? it seems fine to me but if you would like someone to read it over i can. let me know! Erin
silverdragon20021@yahoo.com

Author's Response: It took three tries to get the paragraph placement right for this chapter :P I found someone though, thank you so much for your offer :D

I saw the update when I got to work and so I quickly finished a write-up for my boss so that he wouldn't interrupt me when I read. I took my laptop to the café and am now having a mocha latte and reading your story. It feels like I am doing something very naughty, but it is delicious, like chocolate truffles. *waves hand in front of face and bows head to read* Now, let me read!

Oooh, my heart is a flutter. This is so suspenseful.

Instinct told her to call him a smarmy prat and rush away, but her mind reminded her that this was the boy she had been exposing her soul to for five months; she didn’t even want to think about what her heart was telling her. -- loved this line!

He was upset, but he allowed her to catch up with him. Aww, *swallows hard* what a sweetie.

As his eyes caught hers she smiled, then, as her luck would have it, she slipped on the next step and slid the rest of the way down the stairs on her bottom. -- Okay, I laughed out loud in the café at that, and I think people now believe me to be completely bonkers. Ginny, is turning out to be quite the klutz!

“Are you disappointed it was me?” She focused on looking everywhere but at him.

“No.”

She felt the familiar fluttering. “But you’ve hated me all your life…”

“Things change,” he stated with conviction before walking forward again.

-- These are swooning, lines, my dear. They induce swooning in a woman. *grins*

“When I got her knickers off it looked like her bits had caught on fire…then someone put that fire out with a screw driver.” -- Ha ha! I snorted aloud at this (although I‘m not sure how you could snort internally), and I was also drinking. Luckily, the hot beverage did not spew out my nose. That would have been painful as it would have been unattractive.

Oh, my dear. I loved this. The only problem was that it ended! *folds arms across chest* I mean, really! How dare you?

As for the beta position, *raises hand higher than everyone else and starts shoving girls out of the way* Me! Me! Me! Pick me! I want to be the first! Just send me a message via FIA, and I will email you back. ^_~

Author's Response:

Oh my, between you, EclecticJello, and choravenclaw I'm afraid I'll disappoint someone by choosing. What is a girl to do?

 

You picked all of my favorite lines from this chapter :) You are a fantastic reviewer. I always look forward to your reviews :) I think the best way to read fanfiction is with a mocha latte in a place where every one can look at you like you're a maniac when you laugh, or sigh, or squee :D 

Ok, loved this chapter. It was sweet and real!

DeLaLuna, you must update very quickly, because I've only been logging on this site to read your fict.

I hope this fict has many many many many chapters to come.

Love the story line, can't wait for things to get saucy and you leave really great cliffhangers after each chapter.

Great plot can't praise enough!

Love you and your fict!

x :)

Author's Response: Well I have to leave you wanting more don't I? :) Thank you so much for your review, it gave me the warm and fuzzies yet again.

I love how they got past their initial awkwardness and are completely (well, almost) at ease with each other now.

You really have to update this now!

Author's Response: Ah, but alas, Draco and Ginny are not destined to be at ease with eachother are they? Not with that intense chemistry, but we love them for that :P

I love how they still write back and forth... and their chatter in person... wonderful. I cant get enough.

Author's Response: Sometimes it's easier to write your feelings down :)

:D Update soon.

Author's Response: ASAP I promise :)