Naww, such a dilemma poor Ginny is in.
Um...not! (haha haven't said that in about 10 years)
DracoDracoDracoDracoDraco.
Also, I kind of melted a little at the way you wrote all about her feelings for my favourite Malfoy, you are talented my friend!
Eagerly awaiting more.
:)
Author's Response: Haha, I am very glad to hear it. She's so endearing when she isn't living in denial isn't she? :)
Update ridiculously soon and you shall be forgiven =D
Author's Response: I'll see what I can do :D
Omg! DeLaLuna your chapter was way too short :(
I love the way how Draco wasn't snappy and angry as other authors would portray him but instead he was calm and sincere, you could tell his heart was breaking in two.
I love Ginny in this chapter and you can understand her way of thinking and how confused the girl is...Just hope she doesn't settle for the safe option of Harry James Potter
Who is a dog by the way, somethings not right...Maybe him and Hermione are 'friends with benefits'...It's the perfect cover...Cheating on your girlfriend with your best mate...Who knows what's happening lool
Btw Draco is so damn sexy, if Ginny doesn't get with him, I'm standing next in the queue
Update Veeeeeeeeeeery Soon
x
Author's Response:Ooh, he just likes her too much to be angry. He doesn't feel like himself at all :P I'll let him know that you're there for him if she doesn't accept :P
i think this was necessary, as much as i wanted ginny to run back to draco she needed to figure out where she stood in life..and that harry is a no no for her:)
i can't wait for more this story is so good
im still curious about hermione but i shall patiently wait until you decide to let us know what that was about
and i think i have the ace thing figured out or am at least in the ball park so im curious to see how that scene will go down:)
Author's Response: I hope you can be very patient :) it is a virtue after all. <3
awww, i really hope gin breaks up with harry. It is my belief that even in the books, she has deluded herself into a false sense of love from the time she was ten and saw Harry for the first time without even getting to know him. I hope she chooses draco! good job and update soon!
Author's Response: Haha, she will make the right choice :) it's a matter of interpretation which choice that may be :D
I wonder what her choice will be :)
Author's Response: Hehe, oh my. <3
When you look at it on here, it is a short chapter, but reading it you know that it is the right length for its intended purpose. Ginny needed to have a moment when she could stop and think about what she's doing and what she should do.
I like that she took the time to do this. So many fics will have her instantly choose Draco and not think about the consequences of cheating on Harry (I am guilty of this, by the way. lol).
And she better choose Draco, or I'm going to change your storyline! Hehe
Good chapter. It builds the suspense for the next chapter, which I will get around to beta-ing, after work. Just know that Kim's in line before you. ^_~
Sorry my review was less than stellar. My weekend has drained me. I'm drooling on my desk right now. I shall make up for this with a lovely owl and a better review next time. ^_~
Author's Response: Oh darling, you could never possibly be anything less than stellar <3 Take your time, I'm in no rush, as I've told you before. And Kim totally should go before me :P it gives me something to read. Hehe.
then i must be ur new bestfriend cuz m bouncing off the walls...yay the moment ive been waiting for [but plz dont let me wait long]. mr malfoy does bring out the best in her. when she ditches the cold fish she'll be fine. :)
Author's Response: Haha, that made me giggle, I always imagine rooms made out of trampolines when people say that :P
Forgiven you are already for a great chapter. I loved and hated draco's saddness but Ginny comparing her love for Harry to her brothers had me jumping and yelling "duh and you just realized this!". Beautiful as usual and I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: You can't know happiness without first experiencing sadness :D
oh it's ok!
i completely understand!
=)
i, not exactly expecting adventure either!
to be honedt thid fic doesn't seem like the adventure accepting type and i'm actually gled about it!
;)
i'll be bugging you about the next chapter though!
;P
kisses
Author's Response: Hehe, bug away :)
There' sno sweeter Draco!
i loved the rose!
much beter and meaningful then a whole bouquet...although i gotta say, i was expecting chocolates!
;P
This was a bitter-sweet chapter, although it was more like a drabble, a filling in.
THIS WAS SO SHORT!
But it's a good thing because now we knw the next chapter will be really juicy![unless we only get to see the break up with Harry and not the starting something with Draco...it's still gonna be fun just to watch he break up with Pothead!]
I'm dying here to see if she's gonna rub in Draco's face the fact he doesn't date younger girls!
And also to find out if this is gonna end diferently from the book, is he gonna tell her aobut the mark and everythign else?
OH! I'm so curiously escited!
^.~
kisses
Author's Response:Hehe, I know it was short, but it was kind of a transition chapter, as I'm sure you can understand.
Keep in mind that this is a strictly romance story :P I'm not building up to any sort of adventure plot, hehe.
Hehel, don't worry. I just like to grumble. I love to be teased as a reader. Shocking, I know, but you've perked my interest even more in saying that the scene is perfect for what it is. I shall be content to wait and see, and I'm sure I will like it. You're doing a lovely job with this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I really hope you'll agree, look out for chapter 9 :P
I really like the chapter and I can't wait to see how Harry reacts! I can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Hehe, isn't it all just so exciting?
It was a short chapter, but it got across what it needed to. I still want to know why he calls her Ace *grumbles*, but I shall bite my tongue and be patient. For now. :P
To me the decision is obvious, of course. She must go with Draco, but then there is the fact that she has thought herself in love with Harry for so long and he is 'Harry Potter'. I wonder what she will do. I don't know how long this fic is, so my guess is you're going to go the route where she will go with Draco and then something new will have to happen to disrupt things, maybe to do with Harry, who I don't think is going to take this with a happy smile. He seems like the type who won't really be able to handle the fact that she doesn't want him any longer.
In any case, I guess I'll just have to wait and see what she will do. I don't think she will stay with Harry, at least. She would have to be daft to do so.
Author's Response:Oh my, I hate to keep you in the dark, I'm tempted to just message you and tell you :P buttt, I don't have the heart to move the scene. It's so perfect where it is.
It was a short chapter >.< and it took the longest to get on site, haha. But, I will submit the next one as soon as Lia sends it back to me, and I believe you will like it :) <3<3<3
Wow! Its getting hot in here. :D Draco needs to put that jerk Potter in his place. No one treats Ginny badly.
Author's Response: Haha <3 he wants to, but he likes Ginny too much.
Oh man, this story is amazing. I've been checking every day at least twice to see if its updated or not. manmanman.
You've done a great job with all the characters. At last, Harry is how I've always thought he was (I reallyreally hated him in the actual HP series).
Author's Response: Harry is just a teenage boy, he doesn't quite know what to do with himself. We can't hate him too much :P
OMG I AM sitting on the edge of my chair u have to update ur an awesome writer
Author's Response: Thank you :) Next chapter is in queue :D
It never did make sense to me how those creatures could be happy...
*shrug*
oh the time turner contest seems amazing!
Plus it leaves a lot of space for smut and extremely naughty fics!
=D
Unless someone makes an extremely naughty fic about floberworms...
anyway, i can't wait to see what you and Lia are sending for the challenge!
=D
kisses
Yep. i have started, but i don't think i'm doing a very good job...or you already had it beta-ed because there's not much need of fixing anything!
OOOOHHH!
I loved the idea of working on a fic along with Lia!
Put your heads together and we are gonna have THE MOST amazing fic!
*gleamy eyes*
You ARE a fanfic machine!^
How can you have so much going on in your head and not let us enjoy any of your great work???
GO WORK ON YOUR FICS!
Go now!
Chopchop
You shouldn't be here!
;P
Seriously, you should definately write more, you have so much on your mind!
This writing could stop you from going crazy AND would make us happy as clams[although i dunno why clams are happy or just how happy they are...]
kisses
Author's Response: Haha, your clam comment made me grin :) I will *eventually* work on them. This timeturner contest has just been taking too much of my time :P It happens.
Hi
I really liked your idea of the journal for this. I would like Ginny dumping Harry soon or even better yesterday but I do wonder what will happen now.
Author's Response: :) I'm glad you like it. Thank you for reading :D
Omg! Please let her break up with Harry now! As much as I love the excitement of affair fic, I really would like Ginny to open her eyes, see that Harry treats her badly, and then go for Draco.
Author's Response: :) You'll just have to wait for the next chapter to see...which happily is already in queue hehe.
Lia is lucky i love her too much...
but you young lady?
You'll definately need a smacking and woashing that silly brain of yours!
how could someone NOT love this?
And how could you possibly have it sitting around and COMPLETE since freagging JULY????
We have 7 more chapters?
;DDD
ok i guess we can leave the spanking and brain soaping for later!
;)
But please post it soon!
I swear the suspense is killing me!
I could have a heart attack, you know?Die because i was too excited or too nervous for expecting it!
=O
And i can't wait for me to read the end either!!!
But please tell me you have something else you're working on or at least ready and hidden awya[which is simply wrong of you to do it! You CAN'T keep those fics from the world, especially not from the fans!]
And stop being nervous!
I'll support your writing and i'm sure Lia will too!
;)
kisses
Author's Response:Haha, well you have one of my fics that's been sitting around. Have you started reading that yet?
I have another fic done, being beta'd by the lovely EclecticJello for the time-turner contest, but that can't be posted until after judging.
I also have another fic just laying around half done that I haven't decided if I will restart.
I ALSO have about a million plot bunnies jumping around in my head that I just haven't started yet. So we'll see how those go.
AND THEN, there's something that I've been talking about with Lia, so we have to wait and see about that one as well. This is actually the one I'm most excited about :P
Yes, I am a fanfic machine :D
=O
You're spending far too much time with Lia!
THat's it!
break it up you too!
I can't have another mean little witch in my hands!
From now on i decree[with my self proclaimed powers] that you can no longer take cliffs or other mean ideas from such a Queen of teasing as lia!
;P
Seriously, the WHOLE fic?
Can you please post it faster then?I swear when i see the roll bar reaching the end of the page my heart feels a pinch to it and gets heavier!
I wanna know what happens!!!
At the same time...i don't want it to end!
just tell me this: how many more chapters are there?
i swear i'm going crazy with just imagining what MIGHT happen!
My mind is constantly reeling!
and NOW i also wanna know why he calls her Ace!
And you're absolutely right, it always makes me smile too!
just like when he calls her Red or Pet!
=D
kisses
Author's Response:Hehe, just wait until you see what we have up our sleeves next! You'll hate the both of us all the more! :D
And yes, the ENTIRE fic is written, it just has to be second beta'd by the lovely Lia. I post it as she sends it back :D It was actually totally finished early July...but I was too scared to post it :P I'm a nervous little bug. :D
There are 13 chapters and an epilogue :)
<3 You're fantastic, I can't wait for you to get to the end >.<
FINALLY
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I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVED this!!!
The kisses were amazingly sweet and hot and just perfect!!!
It's a pity she's still with harry so technically she's cheating, but he's a HUMONGUOS ASS!!!!
he deserves to be treated this way!
I love how Draco calls Ginny Ace, it reminds me of Logan and Rory from Gilmore Girls!
This was absolutely great!
I'm glad they finally made their moves and motives clear!
My heart nearly broke when he said that whole thing about not being into younger girls...i was crusehd right along with ginny!
But then he totally turned it around and in the sweetest of ways!
OH!
I love him!!!!
lia, you're the best beta there is and you've proved it, plus you're faster than a bullet!
but now stop showing off as a beta and go back to finish Shades!
;P
You couldn't have picked better beta!
please tell me the next chapter is already written!
i can't wait to read it!
;D
kisses
Author's Response: Hehe, silly girl, the WHOLE STORY IS ALREADY WRITTEN :) Had to put that in caps cuz I knew you'd love it more that way! The Ace thing still makes me smile :) just wait to you read why he calls her that! Eee, I'm excited for you to read the rest of the story! Hehe :P
well i love this new development just cuz draco is more thoughtful and harry is a green eyed monster who is easily influenced by friends. not to mention hes a prize git. loved this chapter. cant wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Hehe, so glad you liked it. The next chapter will be even better I hope :D