Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 2 on Apr 07, 2010 02:30 pm
I like how this story is panning out. The characters are interesting and I look forward to finding out how Draco and Ginny's Hogsmeade date goes. I hope you decide to update soon!
Name: lilactree reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 24, 2010 12:02 pm
You captured the teen-aged mind perfectly in this chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 21, 2010 05:08 pm
*Sigh* Draco in gray cashmere. What a lovely thought.
Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 21, 2010 04:58 pm
*laughs* This is great! Poor Ginny. I don't think any girl could withstand a determined and very sexy Draco, though she certainly made the effort. I can't wait to see what happens at Hogsmeade.
Name: penfold reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 19, 2010 04:40 pm
YES, work for it, boy!
Great, can't wait to read more!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 08:08 pm
Really can't wait to read more. So far this is a really good story. Good Luck! :)
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 07:13 pm
I was delighted to find that this chapter was as cute and funny as the last. Draco and Ginny's interaction was priceless. There is a subtle sexiness to this story that I like - 'Malfoy languidly undid a cuff, and then another. Damn him and his sneaky, underhanded Slytherin ways! He had to know the effect he was having on her! How absolutely infuriating!'
Poor Ginny, having Draco 'undressing in the hallway like some—like some—scarlet man!' "Like some - scarlet man" LOL Probably my favorite line of this chapter.
I loved that Draco has carefully planned
all of this:'grey, of course, brought out his eyes...the cologne was chosen specifically to seduce.' Although even he seems to be 'shocked at his persistence'.
'This was something Draco really wanted and he was working for it, just as he worked for every other thing important to him.' I'm a romantic so I'm hoping that he is not just after her because she was 'clearly reluctant – more than reluctant, she was clearly unwilling – to go out with him.'
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 04:06 pm
Oh my goodness. This was just way too cute. I looooooved it! You seem to have a distinctive sense of writing that just so fresh. I really enjoyed the narration and dialogue of this chapter.
1) "Do not undo the cuffs! I repeat, do not undo the cuffs!"
Oh my goodness, this was so funny. While I was reading this, I imagined Ginny saying this through a horn, the way they do in police movies.
2) It’s all hormones, Malfoy,” Ginny told him hotly, trying to convince herself of the fact. “It’s a simple biological response!”
“Nevertheless, it’s a response, isn’t it? Makes you want to… lose control, doesn’t it?” He raked his eyes over her, slowly rolling up his sleeves, exposing nicely muscled forearms.
*shivers* that was just so...malfoy....
3) ndressing in the hallway like some—like some—scarlet man! The more rational part of her brain interjected that you couldn’t really consider rolling up one’s sleeves undressing. But it was more the way he had done it! With such deliberate, slow movements! The anticipation of it had made her hold her breath. He had to have known the effect it’d have on her.
haha, scarlet man indeed
4) As always, she was the first to speak. “Hogsmeade, Malfoy?” she demanded, wanting to know what he meant by the note.
He raised an eyebrow. “I believe that was my line.”
“I wasn’t asking you to go! I merely—what in Merlin’s name was that note about?”
Haha, general Draco snarkiness
5) He knew that Ginny found him attractive, and there was no shame in using that knowledge to his full advantage. Grey, of course, brought out his eyes, and the cashmere was thin enough to hug but not to cling, suggesting a defined musculature. His jeans were cut neither too baggy nor too tight, emphasising the length of his legs. The cologne was chosen specifically to seduce. Yeah, world domination didn’t come easily.
THe imagery of this is so good...makes me want my OWN malfoy!
Anyways, I'm really loving this story. It's just way too cute. Please tell me that you aren't giving up and are going to finish this fic...Fantastic job and please update soon!
XOXO, JT
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 01:19 pm
"The Night Her Hormones Said Hi"; "The Night Her Hormones Ran Wild";"The Night Her Hormones Took Over Her Brain"...LMAO. I love the way her hormones slowly increase their quest for Ginny-domination. lol so good. i love where this is going. plz dont take too log with the update. its helping me procrastinate in the most spendid ways when i should be studying for my law exams. keep the goodness coming :D
Name: MzGG reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 12:31 pm
oh my god.
this is so god.
i mean i really liked the first chapter but this is even 10000 times better!
PLEASE , please, please update soon!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 09:12 am
a great chappie & lovin' by the way.... draco was seducing ginny. i like his style, he rope ginny right in!!!! a cute plot!!!
Name: eveil woman reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 07:42 am
This is really good, I can't wait for more!
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 12:25 am
;aslkflsihbg;salkflasjdf this is good.
Draco is getting me all flushed ;)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 17, 2010 11:36 pm
Is this all the thrill of the chase for Draco? It kind of seems like it, given the fact that she's the one girl "clearly unwilling" to go out with him.
Thanks for the update! I confess: I'd forgotten about this fic.