Draco and Ginny have been seeing each other on the sly for months when something unexpected happens. Now they have to tell their families. Beat downs, an evil grandmother, muscle cars, Scooby boxer shorts and rednecks make appearances.Category: Long and Completed
I've been trying to read and review this story for what feels like a bloody week now. It is absolutely hilarious, I think you've done a great job (even the little details are hilarious). But by far my favourite parts had to be the Weasley Boys: --Percy pulled a hand nervously through his mullet.--“Yes, there is,” Draco suddenly hissed. “Hide me ” “What?” Draco pointed out in the distance, at the long gravel driveway that connected the Weasley’s home to the paved road. A pickup truck was bouncing along it, approaching quickly. Its bed was filled with redheads. “Your brothers are coming home ”“But...” Ginny said. “They weren’t supposed to get back from dumpster diving until five...”--Sorry for clumping up most of my review with your story, but that my friend is comedic genius. Terrific job.
You by far have the greatest AU story and one of the best Humor fics I've ever read. As for this chapter: Talk about a bad day at work. Poor Draco. I think Lucius giving Ginny a copy of "Grand Theft Auto" and turning her into a car thief who steals a "Cobra" of all cars and having Harry save the day was Classic! There were so many lines that I thought were just priceless but my favourite has to be: "Draco wished everyone would stop telling him his wife was a tramp." Great job!
When Bill Weasley does not return from a simple curse-breaking job, Ginny gets worried. Brushed off by her family as an over-concerned younger sister, Ginny sets off alone to find Bill, unaware of the dangers she'll encounter on the way. It soon becomes clear that she can’t find her brother on her own and she strikes up an unlikely partnership with Draco Malfoy. They journey to Mesopotamia, with an ancient tablet as their only clue to Bill’s whereabouts. Can they find Bill in time? Or will they too become victims of a magic that is older the time itself?Category: Works in Progress
I'm sorry I haven't stumbled upon this before because it's quite good and very well written. I find it to be quite orginial and highly intriguing, I'd like to finish reading the chapters you'ver written and write more comments but I have to flee. I just wanted to tell you, that you have a wonderful story on your hands. -JV
Draco & Ginny's little boy is all grown up and living abroad. See happens when Liam invites his old childhood chum, Lucy Ann, to Rome for a holiday. *will feature D/G in future*Category: Works in Progress
As always a beautiful chapter. But I just had to mention what a great line this was: “We’ll take these too, in every color, except red. A redhead should never wear red.” That was absolutely BRILLANT. Great job.
Sorry, I didn't review earlier, being continually dragged from the computer when your trying to read much less type is not fun. Very niiice, have I told you how much I love Murphy--the Beach Goddess, his whole preception of her was such a guy thing.(sigh) And Pining!Liam--(swoon) No beach bunnies for him.(smile) Great job.
COMPLETE! Strolling through Diagon Alley Lucius Malfoy comes across a little boy who could have been Draco's twin. Has his family tree been expanded, without his knowledge? Has Draco been keeping secrets? Or is he oblivious to the fact that he may have an heir?Category: Long and Completed
So far I'm absolutely loving the story. I really enjoy your Narcissa/Lucius and I'm so happy to see some Ron/Pansy (we don't get much of that). And I LOVE Ron/Pansy. Great Job. -JV
Great work. I'm really enjoying your story and can't wait for you to post another chapter. -JV
The tragic death of their daughter has brought the Weasley family to do the unthinkable: bring Ginny back to life. Yet the risen Ginny is no longer the sweet girl they knew and loved. With the help of one Draco Malfoy, she lives the life she was condemned not to live since birth… and learns the ways of the darker side in the Wizarding community.Category: Works in Progress
Wow, this is the first time I've come across this story and I have to say it's amazing. It's very original which you don't find alot of in D/G and completely realistic (or as far realistic as you can get in the HP-fandom) having the Weasley's bringing Ginny back to life and her wanting to go back. I can see how she will 'rebel' (for lack of a better word) against them and their selfish act. I'm just surprised that maybe one of the Weasley's wasn't admantly against it. Don't know why, but I just expected one of them to. Anyway great story I can't wait to read more. -Don't worry about the Buffy comparison and Everyone should have stopped watching when Angel left.
A girl's chastity is her prize...it's what makes her a prize to her husband's marriage bed and an honour to his family's name...Category: Works in Progress
I like it. I hope to see more from you.
Draco in an invisibility cloak. Ginny in her nightshirt. Need I say more? Formatting issue corrected.Category: Completed Short Stories
Besides a bit of reformating (as it's a bit difficult to read) this is an absolutely great story. I hope you entertain the idea of writing a second chapter.
Author's Response: Honestly, the way it was formatted it was nearly impossible to read. I'm sooo sorry about that! I've corrected the problem. Thank you for reading it despite that. And I am still pondering another chapter :) Glad you enjoyed it thus far!
"Open your eyes, Draco…" She whispered cupping his blackened face in her hands, "open them so you can see me."Category: Completed Short Stories
Good job. I hope to see more stories from you.