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Anise's Only MST Fic by Anise    (Reviews - 75)

Harry, Hermione, Draco, and Ginny are trapped in a dungeon and forced to endure Professor Snape's detention. What does he make them do? Why, read bad fanfic, of course. My one and only MST.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 5922 | Read count: 5419 | Published: Jun 23, 2005 | Updated: Jun 23, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Spirit of Valentine's Day

Hilariously funny!

Having His Cake and Eating it Too by Echo    (Reviews - 32)

Draco gets something good for his birthday.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2355 | Read count: 5059 | Published: Jul 26, 2005 | Updated: Jul 26, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: wonder

Brilliant, funny, sweet! So very well done!

And Knowing is Half the Battle by Echo    (Reviews - 19)

Draco and Ginny have a little tiff about what others know and don't know about them.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1137 | Read count: 5535 | Published: Jul 26, 2005 | Updated: Jul 26, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: mini-me

"My nasty temper? Pot calling the cauldron black, I think."

I loved it!

Enjoy the Silence by Echo    (Reviews - 24)

Draco finds something unexpected doing his prefect rounds at night.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 707 | Read count: 4974 | Published: Jul 26, 2005 | Updated: Jul 26, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: mini-me

She-weasel had just said the F word!

How brilliant is that! Very funny piece! My second favourite line is:He stomped his foot.

A Ferrety Response by archirat    (Reviews - 93)

I'm in a pet store, a MUGGLE pet store, and they still find me.
Well, it figures with the way my life has been turning out recently. With my luck I'll end up being Harry fucking Potter's pet ferret. Bugger. --Draco Malfoy
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Action, Drama
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2283 | Read count: 6670 | Published: Oct 03, 2005 | Updated: Oct 14, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: In which the Hero gets a bath and some rather disturbing images stuck in his head.

Hmm, strange. Funny, but strange.

Lantern Walks by Adelagia    (Reviews - 50)

How two lost souls manage to find each other in the darkness.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4235 | Read count: 4782 | Published: Dec 11, 2005 | Updated: Dec 11, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Lantern Walks

This is perfect. I like the idea of him lingering in the shadows, grieving only when everyone else is gone. It´s very in character. And of course, the snapdragons were an added bonus :-)

The Clock by jandjsalmon    (Reviews - 38)

D/G/H

Ginny looks at the family clock and remembers when other members joined the family! Dedicated to Marilyn -- don't give up hope on us D/G writers girl... we CAN deal with new canon! ;) And a big giant HUG to my fabulous beta Colleen. You ROCK! ;)

Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3534 | Read count: 4541 | Published: Dec 12, 2005 | Updated: Dec 12, 2005
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: May 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Clock

I think I listened to the Podcast version of this and then went to read it as well. I really like the way you write and how Draco and Ginny manage to move on without forgetting, it is very much like a phoenix rising out of the ashes. Brilliant work.

Author's Response: Thank you SO much! I really appreciate the review. You rock! :D

Eyes I Dare Not Meet In Dreams by Nokomis    (Reviews - 11)

Between the idea / And the reality / Between the motion / And the act / Falls the Shadow. - T.S. Eliot.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Horror
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1563 | Read count: 568 | Published: Feb 15, 2006 | Updated: Feb 15, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Eyes I Dare Not Meet in Dreams

Very dark, very well written. Can´t think of it too much, it gives me the creeps. (That is a compliment, really!)

Unstoppable by CharmedLife19    (Reviews - 224)

There are three things that truly matter to Lucius Malfoy: his family, his wealth and his blood. So of course, it was of utmost importance that his son marry a pureblood. Thus Lucius begins to arrange the perfect bride for his son. She must have both beauty and brains. She must be skillful with a wand, but with the elegance to know when to use it. When it comes down to it there is really only one woman that matches the criterion, but she comes with one problem: She’s a Weasley.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 25492 | Read count: 71866 | Published: May 23, 2006 | Updated: May 13, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: A Shocking Proposal

This is so good! I love how you´ve written Lucius, he is so self-assured without being obnoxious. Brilliant!

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A New Beginning

Again, very well done, but I thought she would have at least insisted on meeting him before agreeing to become his rightful wife. That seemed a bit strange to me.

Author's Response: Seeing as they\'d grown up together I figured they didn\'t really have to \'meet\'.

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Answers and Arguments

“I was forced to marry a man I held so little respect for that I could honestly say I would’ve sooner married a flobberworm. In my shoes, how would you have felt?”

But she wasn´t forced, was she? Her parents asked her, she considered it and agreed. It wasn´t blackmail, she wasn´t imperiused, so there wasn´t any forcing her to do anything involved. This really does confuse me.

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: May 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Surprises and Balls

I liked it!

Naked-Eye Viewing by applecede    (Reviews - 13)

Draco tries to persuade Ginny to his way of seeing.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1309 | Read count: 1748 | Published: Jun 20, 2006 | Updated: Jun 20, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

That is so sad. Andy yet, beautifully written.

Nightswimming by applecede    (Reviews - 26)

They exist in the dark hours. A look into Draco and Ginny's relationship.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1907 | Read count: 1587 | Published: Jul 18, 2006 | Updated: Jul 18, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

I really enjoyed it, well done.

Manipulating a Malfoy by CCC    (Reviews - 23)

Draco refuses to talk about their future. Ginny tries to use Harry to make him jealous. Harry has his own agenda.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2731 | Read count: 5961 | Published: Jul 23, 2006 | Updated: Jul 23, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I enjoyed it!

Tears by idreamofdraco    (Reviews - 20)

Ginny contemplates life as one window of opportunity closes. One-shot.
Category: Completed Short Stories, Poetry
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Molly Weasley, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Tears
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1017 | Read count: 4268 | Published: Aug 17, 2006 | Updated: Aug 17, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it! Determined and heartbroken Ginny and seemingly cold Draco always make a good plot!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! n_n

The Maker of Coffins by EverVengeful    (Reviews - 59)

He sees all the pitfalls and glories of death; how two lovers would cheat it, to how a torn family would face it.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 965 | Read count: 4778 | Published: Aug 23, 2006 | Updated: Aug 23, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: May 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I actually read this awhile ago, and was apparently stupid enough to remember reviewing it. So, here I am, now.

Your writing itself is excellent, but the plot you came up with is amazing, it is perfect. Chosing an unknown and innocent bystander to tell their tale was such an ingenious idea (and to have him be a coffin-maker!).

The thought that Draco would steal into Ginny´s final resting place is both creepy and sad, and even though this isn´t an easy happy fic, it´s most certainly one of my favourites.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

A Dysfunctional Relationship by CCC    (Reviews - 46)

Ginny has a love/hate relationship with Draco. Is there any hope that he will ever treat her with respect, or is she just setting herself up for a fall?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 806 | Read count: 5972 | Published: Aug 26, 2006 | Updated: Aug 26, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A part of him would die...and he treats her the same way as his father treats his mother. I think that in itself is way of saying I love you.
That is a very heartbreaking story, I wish it was longer, because I enjoyed it so much :-)

Author's Response: Thank you. I was trying to show that his behavior was based on how he was raised and her expectations were as well. It\'s a bit melodramatic, but it seemed right. I\'m glad you liked it.

Sleep Spent by Nokomis    (Reviews - 20)

Draco is happy with this life.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 706 | Read count: 3784 | Published: Sep 01, 2006 | Updated: Sep 01, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cleer twist, clever plot, clever writer.

Some Things Are Better Left Unsaid by CCC    (Reviews - 163)

Draco suspects Ginny of having an affair.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 8 | Word count: 13694 | Read count: 17340 | Published: Oct 08, 2006 | Updated: Mar 04, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, how sad! Poor Draco. This might make me sound evil, but well done!

20 Random Facts that you’d never guess about Draco Malfoy by jandjsalmon    (Reviews - 99)

20 Random things about Draco featuring the lovely Ginny, occasionally some other Weasley's, and even Scarhead himself. (with a cameo by two beautiful 'not pink haired' babies)
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1141 | Read count: 14210 | Published: Nov 20, 2006 | Updated: Nov 20, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: 20 Random Facts that you’d Never Guess About Draco Malfoy

Sweet!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! :D

Girl with a Plan by Echo    (Reviews - 62)

If Pansy Parkinson says she's your friend, don't trust her. If she invites you over, don't go. You might wake up hung over, in only your underwear, and in Malfoy's or Zabini's bed.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3841 | Read count: 12265 | Published: Dec 11, 2006 | Updated: Dec 11, 2006
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: So it would definitely seem

Very funny, I liked it.

A Chocolate Covered Malfoy by CCC    (Reviews - 365)

Ginny and Draco are assigned to be partners in a cooking class. When they spill a pan full of chocolate cake batter, interesting things ensue.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 23020 | Read count: 89370 | Published: Jan 07, 2007 | Updated: Mar 25, 2007
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

“If those two reproduce, their progeny will probably make Voldemort look like a Hufflepuff.” Brilliant and funny. The last line, however, was the best. You made laugh out quite loudly.

Threads by Pepperjelly    (Reviews - 4)

He's in his sixth year. She's in her fifth. He was a Slytherin and she a Gryffindor. Will they ever end up together? Watch, my dears, and learn how in this prequel to my current fic Musubiya Mystery Theatre.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: The Starlight Chronicles
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1234 | Read count: 4465 | Published: Feb 27, 2007 | Updated: Feb 27, 2007
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 of 1

I like that you mentioned him being a gentleman. Very sweet fic.

Pretty As You Please by Nokomis    (Reviews - 22)

Ginny wasn’t quite sure how the situation had spun so wildly out of control.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Neville Longbottom
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1135 | Read count: 5281 | Published: Mar 13, 2007 | Updated: Mar 13, 2007
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This made me laugh out loudly. Brilliant!