What a wonderful chapter. I love the fact she thinks the boy is Draco, but he proves to be Scorpius. Also, the exchange between Draco and Ginny was everything I could have desired. It's short, but then your writing is such that you don't need lots of words to get your point across.

Aww, this was lovely. I really, really liked it. The imagery was just beautiful, and I enjoyed seeing Ginny get a chance to express her love for nature. ^_^

Author's Response: There's something about rain that makes you want to a) curl up with a blanket and a good book or b) go dance in it and get ill. :) Thanks for the review! I owe you bunches. I know. Now I feel guilty.

Aw, so adorable.

Well, I decided I had to check this out since I know your name from so many reviews. I find your concept fascinating, but I don't really get a sense of why they're both trying to commit suicide at this point. I think you really need to flesh that out to make this story believable.

I /do/ like the fact you're making this humour/romance, and I think you've got some great ideas and potential with this story. Really, my main concern is the suicide part. I'm sure you realise that wanting to commit suicide is not something you just randomly decide to do -- it's usually something that festers in your brain. So a bit more about why the two have got to this point would help.

Other than that, I thought it was an interesting beginning, and I look forward to seeing where you take it next.

Author's Response: That would all be revealed later - ofcourse there is a reason why there are both trying to do that, and the readers will find it once they decide to tell each other - because revealing everything in one chapter would take away all the mystery :) Thanks a lot for reviewing and appreciating :) Its the first story I have posted at this site so feels great =D

At first, I thought Ginny was really, really stupid. She should have known better than to play Quidditch while pregnant. But as I kept reading, it really was just heart-breaking. The fact she buried it really got me.

I like that this isn't a heavily romantic piece. By that, I mean there are no grand declarations or whatever. It was simple and honest, and that's what makes it so touching. I loved it.

Author's Response: ginny WAS really really stupid. yes, she knew better but in our rpg she is so stubborn & determined to do everything her way, she did. geh! LOL

i don't think there's too much romantic to be found in teen pregnancy, and especially not hers. thank you for reading & reviewing though!

Hahhaa, this was cute. I was in a crappy mood and this made me smile, so thank you! ^_^

Author's Response: Awww. You're welcome, Kim! I'm glad you liked it!

Ah, Roma, I couldn't resist reading this one again. I gushed over it last time, and I would gush over it again, but it's morning, and I am tired in the mornings.

Still, this was brilliant. I love, love, love the way you have them interact with each other, interposed with those little thoughts (Left ears of the enemies, indeed). And I still laugh every time at this:

//And although I know I must look like the perfect candidate for Mr. I-look-like-a-handkerchief-so-please-cry-on-me, you'll have to excuse me because I'm currently off duty//

Plus, the ending is just perfect. Brilliant, brilliant little one shot. I love it. ^_^

Wow! What a beginning. I'm loving this so far! I've read quite a few Draco-is-a-prisoner fics, but this is already different and your Draco has already established himself as 'your' Draco. I also love the fact that I was able to connect with him so easily. I felt like I was drifting along there with his thoughts, which is no mean feat.

I really hope you update this soon. I will be eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^

Author's Response: I'm SO glad you like it. n_n The next chapter will be up as soon as I fix up the third one. Or before that, if I get impatient. :P Thanks for reviewing!

I've been wondering when this was going to be updated. Lovely chapter, as usual. I'm glad we finally got some answers about Jimmy. The conversation between he and Draco was very touching and awkward -- as all those kind of conversations are. It's nice Draco was able to give Jimmy the strength he needed to survive out in the real world, though. I just hope nothing happens to the poor guy.

I kind of want to shake Ginny for being so obstinate, but I suppose that is her character. This story definitely makes me sympathise with Draco more than Ginny.

Author's Response: Ah, Jimmy. I think his story would be an interesting one. Well, relatively. He really was a shell of himself at The Cottage. It's actually really sad what became of him to get him there. His fear was all-consuming. I don't think Draco realizes what they've both done for each other.

Ah, Ginny. I think Draco really wants to shake her. Or punch her or something. Ginny's story is just sad in every way that you could mean 'sad'. :( And the sad thing is it probably won't get explained well enough to infer the sadness of it. Maybe I'll have to write a sequel, about her story. She's probably more interesting being angry at Draco all the time, though.

Hehehe, loved it! A great ending to a wonderful story. I'm just sad it's over, but all things must come to an end, I suppose. In any case, this was lovely. I'm glad they got to have a happy ending. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks, Kim! n_n During the exchange, so many people asked for a sequel, but I probably won\'t do that now. D: I do have a couple of short drabbles from this story that I\'m going to post on FFN at some point or another. Thank you for reading! I\'m glad you liked it. :D

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! This was exactly what I needed right now. Light, fun, adorable!! I loved it. Draco's awkwardness was so cute as he was gearing up to kiss her, and Ginny was just wonderful. ^_^

Hehee, this was great. Very funny. ^_^