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Real name: Manu
Registered: Aug 18, 2006
Membership status: Member
Beta-reader: Yes

Beta/ beta-reader/ Avid reviewer, always have a coment about everythign i read, not alwayas nice, but try to be constructive!
=)
I love D/G and romance so i like the fics where in the end everything turns out ok for them. Without one or both dying.

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Vineyard Summer by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 387)

Ginny Weasley is sent to stay with her grandparents until the war ends, as her parents want to keep her out of harm's way. Her grandparents have another guest, another person in hiding, and a relationship quickly blossoms between them. However, with the war and so many secrets around them, Ginny isn't sure how to make it work. Fluffy occasionally, but things can't always be perfect, can they? Decisions have to be made and consequences dealt with.

For a fleeting moment, she imagined that they would never hear from their families again, that they would remain together in Tuscany until they were old and gray, with great-grandchildren. Much to her surprise, the thought didn’t make her as sad as she thought it should.

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 23 | Word count: 123807 | Read count: 65510 | Published: Sep 24, 2005 | Updated: Jul 25, 2011
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

YAY o|
YAY |o/
YAY o/

THANK YOU!
You're the best!!!
;)

kisses

Oh, i'm following you on twitter =D
although i dunno how to use it yet =d

kisses

Author's Response: Cool! Tell me your twitter name so I can follow you too :D

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

http://twitter.com/Manuxinhace

=D

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Exposed

OH Jess!
Sorry i don't know how to use Twitter!
If i did I would have loved to loose a night's sleep or more to help you with beta!!!

“If it makes you feel any better, I thought the pictures were dead sexy. I want to frame them.”
HEHEHE
i laughed with this, it's such a great behavior for Draco, makes us love him even more!
=D
The way he cared for her hand too, it helps melting my heart.

I DO love shower scenes! The washcloth was a nice addition! ;) They are trluy great...you should add a rain scene too! =)
I loved when he entered the bathroom and called her gorgeous, and delicious.
Her thoughts about the table and dinner should definately be explored! it would be hillarious to see Draco's reaction to coming on the dinner table DURING dinner. =O
The end was certainly worrysome, i can't wait to see them in Rome!
And I really wanna see the creepy side and know what will be of Har and Grace, plus are the Death Eaters coming?
Hmmm... questions, questions...The suspense is killing me!!!
=OO
I LOVE IT!
=DD

kisses

Author's Response: you are such a sweetheart! thank you very much. i should have made that washcloth scene longer, but it was about midnight and i was desperate to get that chapter up and get to bed because i had work. the next chapter isn't going to be a very pleasant one to read, but maybe i'll work on a table scene after that! i can't give away any Grace & Har secrets... yet!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

OOOOOOHHHH
i will LOVE the table scene! i just know it!
=D

Hope the next chapter isn't too sad, or too dark!
I'm dying to know Har and Grace's secret!
i'm a curious one!
=D
I hope Draco and Ginny can find some time to spend together, in a sweet way, even if there's no sex.
Will the next chapter be up soon?
i'm like my little monster dog, they more i have the more i want. The more i read, the more i want to read. =DD

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Change, Now It's Time For Change

Gods, you're amazing Jess!
I mean, sure the ending was kinda awful and Draco was a total JERK from the beginning until the very end of this chapter, he bloody raped her, even though it was bodily concensual, her mind certainly did not want that.
The Ulrich guy creaped me out to the very core and i'm glad Draco was there to keep her away from him.
I think she should spend the night in the tub or something, or just have the night away to cry in a bathrobe in the loo.
Draco should definately make up for his mistakes, be the tender, sweet, caring lover he had been until now.
Even if he stalls for the truth, he should tell her, some of it now, some of it 2 or 3 chapters from now, but just stop being an arse and treat her so badily!
He should love her, adore her body, beg for her forgiviness, cry do whatever, just get her to see him with in love eyes again! Get her to respect him again and not resent him!
THis was beautiful, you know, in a sick, crazy kkinda way, even the "rape" scene was beautiful, i know it sounds kinda twisted, but this is incredible!

I hope the next chapter is up soon!
=)
When are you going to post it?

By the way, congratulations, AGAIN, this time about the lenght of the chapter, i think this was the longest so far, and amazingly well writen!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: I really, really felt the need to pull some hardcore canon!draco back into the story, but he's already edging his way back out. All in all, this story is supposed to be sweet & fluffy-in general. Of course, there are always road bumps on the path to happiness, as this chapter proved. I was worried about Ulrich freaking some people out, but as one of my ever reassuring betas remind me - it's a holiday in a foreign place, he's an attractive older man, Ginny's a pretty thing. Lolita anyone? As for the sex scene, plenty of people told me they really liked it, but in the next chapter it will be made clear that wasn't a rape scene. And Draco will beg for forgiveness (as much as a Malfoy can, I suppose) & Ginny will do what she needs to go :D

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

Totally reminded me of Lolita, also Audrey Hepburn (althought she only acted with older man because none of the younger ones were good enough to be by her side but that's a whole other story)
Ulrich is the kinda guy you meet and feel attracted to in a weird creepy way, the you meet and flirt but never has the guts to go through with it.
So it was perfect, from the first to the last glance, it was magnifique!
It wasn't a RAPE scene, it was concensual, just in a different kinda of way, her body always responds to his but her mind didn't want to at that moment(if that makes any sense).

I'm dying to see what his apologies will be like.
=D
Also could you please continue the next chapter where this one ended?
It would really suck if all of a sudden in the next chapter they were already on their way to a different place or something like this.
The next chapter should begin with him coaxing her out of the bathroom or Ginny coming out to find him asleep or just not there, i don't know, but definately pick up where it left, please don't let this get mucked up.
*twinkling eyes* PLEASE say yes to this!
=)

I know i'm more meddlesome than a beta, but is just that i'm not good with creating things, to make up for it i'm really good at getting things that re already made and making them better, even if it's only vocabulary.

Sorry about the rambling , i tend to do that a lot.

Do you know when you're gonna post the next chapter? Or at least if it's gonna be this long or shorter?

kisses

Author's Response: The next chapter is mostly written & its just as long as this one, if not a bit longer. & yes, it picks up right where this one ended. You aren't meddlesome at all! I like knowing what people are looking for so I can work it into the chapters!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

=Di'm glad to hear this, all of this!
And thanks!
Not only for picking up where it stopped but also for saying i'm not meddlesome,a lthough i know what a pain i can be sometimes
=)
Do you know when it will be up?I have some serious problems with waiting an my nails have been suffering for it, yes i still bite my nails.
Also i'm getting extra large with the compulsive eating in order to calm my nerves...anyway, do you think it's gonna take long?

kisses

A Ferrety Response by archirat    (Reviews - 93)

I'm in a pet store, a MUGGLE pet store, and they still find me.
Well, it figures with the way my life has been turning out recently. With my luck I'll end up being Harry fucking Potter's pet ferret. Bugger. --Draco Malfoy
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Action, Drama
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2283 | Read count: 6664 | Published: Oct 03, 2005 | Updated: Oct 14, 2005
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: In which the Hero gets a bath and some rather disturbing images stuck in his head.

ooooooohh
i like this
it's so great and unusual!
i want more
please please please!!!
=DD

kisses

Along Came A Wizard by fallenwitch    (Reviews - 642)

A bet, a wanted witch, and a magical contract land Draco in a most unexpected situation. Can his Slytherin soul survive intact or will he succumb to one redheaded witch in bondage? Snarky humor, romance, and a pinch of angst. “I don’t want it. I didn’t order it. Now leave me the fuck alone.” He slammed the door closed. Only it didn’t close due to the enormous boot wedged into its threshold. One loud grunt later and it flung back open, almost hitting him in the face. Draco reflexively leaned back, and that’s when she was thrust into his unsuspecting arms.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 18 | Word count: 46917 | Read count: 43914 | Published: Nov 29, 2005 | Updated: Jan 18, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: A True Pureblooded Witch

Good god that was awful!
It drenched me with sadness!
left me depressed!
Don't take me home you're brilliant bt u should definately write about 5 more chapters telling us how she got well before the made lvoe and how they have a baby and it's a gorgeous boy then, 2 years later a beautiful girl.
Show us how she's better, comepletely ok even without magic, hell maybe even return her magic!
Just don't let this sad, open end!

kisses

Another Day by Qweene_of_Argylle    (Reviews - 13)

Since the end of her fifth year, Ginny's been acting strangely. What happens when she finally breaks down and confesses something interesting to Harry?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Angst
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1461 | Read count: 485 | Published: Dec 11, 2005 | Updated: Dec 11, 2005
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Interrogations Galore

Hey, i'm a little confused about the story but i really liked, i have only been a semi-beta before, but if you want i could beta for you!
=D
just let me know, kay?

kisses

Cedar, Columbine; Coriander and Hemlock by tudorrose1533    (Reviews - 50)

A story of flowers and intrigue and memories best forgotten. Ginny Weasley's Christmas holidays are haunting and confusing, as she is drawn to the presence of of an elusive and mysterious Draco Malfoy who is altogether too memorable for anybody's good.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 5809 | Read count: 5274 | Published: Mar 08, 2006 | Updated: Mar 08, 2006
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Cedar, Columbine; Coriander and Hemlock

you should put a warning: character inside death
This was horribly sad!
How could you do this?
It's so sad!
it's horrible!
it brings nightmares!
this is one of the fics i won't be reading again
it was plain cruel and uncalled for!

Saving You by dracosnaughtyprefect    (Reviews - 25)

Ginny comes in the night to feel something from Draco, but he's going to end it tonight.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1479 | Read count: 1382 | Published: Apr 14, 2006 | Updated: Apr 14, 2006
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

beautiful,beautiful
BEAUTIFUL story!
Wish we could have a cookie to see how they ended up after she went back to herself, like 2 or 3 years in the future, but still..
gourgeous story, got me smiling and crying (actually crying and smiling) and i loved it!
thank you for posting this!
it was absolutely beautiful!
Congratulations!
=D

kisses

The Plan by Mishavay    (Reviews - 7)

Ginny is tired of being over looked. She hatches a scheme with the help of her best friend to not be ignored...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 919 | Read count: 608 | Published: May 24, 2006 | Updated: May 25, 2006
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Stunned Into Silence.

It's a good fic, but I'm a little out of speach, i liked, but there's a LOT missing!
Could you please write more?
You have potential for a great fic!
=D

kisses

Ginny's Revenge by CCC    (Reviews - 376)

Ginny catches Harry with another woman. What will she do for revenge?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 26 | Word count: 73871 | Read count: 86117 | Published: Jun 15, 2006 | Updated: Sep 14, 2009
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

AAAAWWWW!!!
I just can't help myself!
Loving Blaise is just as easy as loving Draco!
They are the sweetest creatures, even when they are being unpleasent they still manage to be awfully charming!

The proposal was kinda fast, but rather unique and i liked it very much!
;)

kisses

Hesperides' Apple by ogygiasylph    (Reviews - 871)

When Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 33 | Word count: 166850 | Read count: 239464 | Published: Jun 29, 2006 | Updated: Sep 17, 2009
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: 8. Kindling suspicion

HI!
This fic is going great, and i'm really liking it!
I loved how you put Brazil in here! (Yes, i'm brazilian!)
Fernando de Noronha was well spoken of, could have added forró to the restaurant, but it's not muggle, so it's ok. The beach does exist, it's beautiful and private, you have to walk through a vertical cave hole to get there, not walk as much as climb down and it's wonderful!

Brigadeiros are Brazilian treats made of sweetened condensed milk, butter and Nesquik. They are the most delicious, sugary, and fattening things ever invented by man.
We actually use Nescau, 4 tabblespoons for one of butter and a can, or tin if you wll of condensed milk, you mix it until it's thick and boiling and when you mix the spoon (you have to mix all the time until it's done) against the bottom of the pan the brigadeiro isn't glued to it, but getting out of thhe way so you can see the bottom.
It's truly delicious and if you want i can give you a delicious recipe for docinho de leite em pó, which is powder milk sweet if you wish to translate.

Anyway, great job with the fic!
=)

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 08, 2009 Title: Hesperides' Apple

This was one of the most beautiful stories i have ever read, and that's saying a lot considergin most of my life i spend reading.
This was incredible and so very beautiful
i hope it's not too much to ask for this, but could you make this a serie?
Much like one Rainpudle wrote, from here you go to another stories, one with the boys within their first year, another pregnancy, having them grow up and being kids, going to hogwarts...you know, the whole thing
it would be wonderful to count this as a series
it's truly a beatiful story and i can't seem to get tired of it
Read it twice now
=D

Congratulations on your writing and plotting skills, they are trully amazing!
Thank yo so much for posting this!

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

AAAWWWW!
I loved this!
It's soooo beautiful!
Thank you so much for posting this!
It's truly beautiful!
I loved it!
=D

kisses

Not Quite Fate by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 933)

*COMPLETE* Destiny knew better than to bring these two together. One man, determined to draw back an errant Malfoy, is not so wise, and Ginny soon finds herself caught up in events that are not quite Fate.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 37 | Word count: 222518 | Read count: 386999 | Published: Jul 13, 2006 | Updated: Aug 04, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Oct 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Unthinking

FINALLY a kiss
although her reaction was certainly NOT expected, the first one yes, this last one?
definately NOT!

Great story by the way
;)

Kissing the Wrong Ginny. by CCC    (Reviews - 294)

Draco and Pansy like to play games. What happens when a Polyjuice Plan goes wrong?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 33216 | Read count: 26912 | Published: Jul 27, 2006 | Updated: Jan 02, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

“You know, I’ve never been ashamed of you until today. You didn’t treat Pansy very well, but I attributed that to your young age. I have no idea where your value system came from. Your father never would have treated a woman the way you treated Ginny.”

OH i DO love Cissa!
She's amazing, isn't she?
ijust love when she acts like that!
great character!

kisses

Lemondrop Conspiracy by Lirie Halliwell    (Reviews - 53)

When a Quidditch incident sends Ginny Weasley into the Hospital Wing, Draco must conquer his innermost hysterical tendencies to endure her company throughout the duration of his detention. However, unbeknownst to him, sinister conspiracy has been woven by three unlikely allies.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: Blood
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 11272 | Read count: 7048 | Published: Aug 04, 2006 | Updated: Aug 04, 2006
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Conspiracy!

the lemon drop was kinda wierd and meaningless trhought all the fic
but forgetting about the title and it's meaning, or lack of it...
it was a really great, sweet, funny, endearing fic!
=)
congratulations on your writing!
;)

kisses

Midnight Demons by Lorelai Walker    (Reviews - 21)

AU. The war is over and Voldemort is in power. Draco Malfoy has risen within the ranks of the new Ministry, whilst Ginny Weasley, her family dead, is a cage dancer at a wizarding nightclub.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3201 | Read count: 945 | Published: Aug 20, 2006 | Updated: Aug 20, 2006
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Palantir

HI!
This is really good!
why did you stop writing?
it was gonna be sooo hot and delicious!
=)
you should definately pic this up where you left!
=D

kisses

A Dysfunctional Relationship by CCC    (Reviews - 46)

Ginny has a love/hate relationship with Draco. Is there any hope that he will ever treat her with respect, or is she just setting herself up for a fall?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 806 | Read count: 5972 | Published: Aug 26, 2006 | Updated: Aug 26, 2006
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're rught!
This IS dysfunctiobal, but in a most beautiful way!
=)
another wonderful job!
=D
congrats!

kisses

The Enemy of Souls by Jaden Malfoy    (Reviews - 121)

After an unexpected attack on Hogsmeade takes the lives of several loved ones, Ginny Weasley is left with only grief as a remnant of war. But what she never anticipated, in the wake of all the tragedy, was to find her will to live again in the form of a bawling, grey-eyed baby left to die in the wreckage of battle... the baby of Draco Malfoy. REVISED VERSION.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 21 | Word count: 170678 | Read count: 57155 | Published: Aug 28, 2006 | Updated: Sep 26, 2009
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen

WOW!
THat''s all my mind allows me to say right now...WOW!
This was really great you know?
The memories, the walk everything was brilliant, the muggle way he had to carry her because they didn't have their wands, it was all great
but the kisses?That was incredible!
I do hope they do this again in the next chapter, although you jumped from the first contact right to a few hours later, and i would prefer if you had described the kiss better and spent more time with the kissing scene, but still it was amazing.
=D
Congratulations and thank you for posting this!
=)

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Sixteen

WOW!
This is the first time i'm going to say this and i hope it's not the last
This fic REALLY has a plot!
I mean, usually it has some plot but i'm more concerned abut romnce and kisses and all that smut and all...but this is AMAZINGLY well written!
I mean, i've actually read everything, i've been paying attention, i worry about other characters such as evil Lucius and it's simply amazing!
never i was attracted to a fic's plot before!
I have to gve it to you girl: You're incredible!
All hats off!
Congratulations!
and thank you very VERY much for posting this!

kisses

Author's Response: Thank you! I can honestly say this has to be one of the best reviews I've ever received :) I'm glad the plot has been interesting, it took me a while to fully develop everything. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

=)
Thanks!
I already had my hands in my heart as i was reading the new chapter1
You really are an amazing writer!
i mean if it wasn't for the wizrding world and all that belonging to J.K. rowling you should definately get published!
Congratulations on your skills, you're amazing!
;D

kisses