Hehehe
*blushes*
Nw you know how i feel, my mum and sis think i'm a complete lunatic for laughing, cryig andgasping and all sorts of other things while reaing your fics!
^;~

Well, i'm trying my best to breathe!
You just keep making me breathless by writing such a wonderful things.
Besides, i almost had a heart problem because it skipped a few beats and then started beating really fast.

*pulls Draco out of your lap and glares at you* He's mine.

*SNORTS!!*
You're truly wonderful Bethany!
And really makes me laugh and snort in a very un lady like manner my mother detests!

I think this might be a rather common dream among females. I mean, come on!

Hehe...i never dd mention what i was planning to do to him before the waking...
*whistles and looks around*

Hehe, he's just too great!
=D

Hey Beth, have you sent the next chapter yet?
I'm crazy to see the waking up...and i'm in doubt which one is better...they waking up and getting all cuddly or Blaise walking in on them...
HMMMM... can' wait to see what you have boiling in your cauldroun...
^;~


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Author's Response: *giggling manically* You're gonna love this next chapter. Oh yes you are. Haven't posted it yet, but I'll have it up as soon as I can tomorrow. :D

You wrote this a YEAR ago???
And you're keeping it from me??
=OOOO
you're pure evil!!!
Put a bow around his neck and send Draco too me through FEDEX ASAP!
You just being evil to him and keeping him from the world for over a year, i just don't accept it!
It's my turn now!
HMMPH!


Well, i did tell you i spent all afternoon with boys...they are much like the marauders, only older and just love the sexual innuendo jokes.
;P

Well, it was a big change, but they have these feelings for a while now and they were keeping them surpressed.
When one gaveaway, the other just coldn't resst.
;D
I think it's very fitting!
^;^


YOu evil little witch!
YOu RE going to turn my bones ino mush!
I just get crazier and crazier over Draco!
^;^


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Author's Response: Lol! I was posting When No One Else Was Looking! I didn't want to try to keep track of two at once, especially since I was still working with harrypotterfanfiction.com. Updates would have been too far separated for my liking, let alone yours. ;)

AAAAAAWWWW!
I'm so so glad he missed her!
I loved the way he absolutely wants to be with her, the last one he sees before he wakes up and the first one he sees as he wakes up.
It's just so so sweet!
^;^


Ginny was standing at the small table in the corner with her hair pulled up in a messy knot. She had an apron tied around her waist and one fist propped on her hip. Her other hand was waving her wand in a continuous pattern over a steaming plate. It was from this plate that the smell was emanating and whatever spell she was using was sending it swirling on the air and out the door.

Hehe.
Gin definately should have been in Slytherin!
Absolutely EVIL way to get him there!
She sure takes Molly's lessons seriously grabing a man by the stomach.



“You look beautiful,” Draco whispered,
covered her mouth with one finger. “Weasley, I mean it. You’re beautiful.” He smoothed some loose tendrils of hair off her neck. “In fact,” he murmured into her ear. “I rather think it’s sexy.”

OOOHH!!!
You have found my weak spot!
I LOOOOVE, absolutely LOVE kitchen scenes!
i completely agree with Draco's point of view, either man or woman look really sex while cooking.
i loved the apron to accentuate her curves and the messy knot in her hair is just really sexy!
[is there any chance we[and by that i mean ME] will have more kitchen scenes, especially in other fics????]



He pulled her close again and pressed a kiss to her cheek, causing her to blush again. Then he decided that wasn’t enough and kissed her nose. Then her eyelids and across to her ear and down to her jaw.

i love theses kisses peppered all over the face.
They are just so sweeet and tender.


Draco moaned and gripped her hips, pulling her tighter against him. He tilted his head and breathed her in as the kiss continued. Ever so slowly, he pulled away. Ginny made a small sound of protest and he smirked, wriggling his arms into a comfortable position around her back. “Liked that, did you?” he asked smugly.

=D
Smug Draco is really hot.
They are acting like this newlywed couple right now and before they actred like an old married one.
They're just so comfortable around each other.


“You prat!” Ginny said, knocking him on the chest. Then she smoothed her hand up to his shoulder, belying her indignation.
“Hmm,” Draco said as they bumped into his target. “I am, aren’t I?” He picked up a piece of the dark, still-warm bread and bit into it with a happy sigh.
Ginny licked her lips as he chewed, her eyes riveted to his mouth.
Draco raised an eyebrow at her. He made a show of enjoying his next bite, tightening his grip around her waist. When he’d swallowed he said, “Oh, did you want some?”
Ginny huffed and tried to twist around and reach the plate, but Draco held her still. “Oh, come on,” she groaned. “Now you’re just being mean.”

NOw they're just being two kids bantering and he's doing the very best to annoy her!
=)
i guess he's just the pull your pigtails kinda guy,huh?


ok, so Blaise in all of his blaisenss is just too awesome and incredible for words!
You gotta love him!
The fact that Ginny forgot to give him a message because she got too carried in their kissing is just wonderful!
She's inlove and completely safe in her happy-bubble!
=D


Draco still had his arm around Ginny’s waist and she was bent slightly backwards over the table, one hand on his shoulder, the other on his neck. One of his legs was between hers and there was very little space between the two of them.

WHOA!
I just love when things get like this.
Sure snogging is great, smut is wonderful, but when we get this intimate moment is just perfect.
The leg between hers was really hot!
And the fact she had to bend backwards to get some space?
WOW!


Ginny was looking supremely smug. Draco looked at her inquiringly and she smirked. “I figured you wouldn’t be too keen on sharing,” she told him. “And I suspected that Blaise might be in here before too long. So I put a little stinging charm on the plate.”
“Told you that you two were made for each other,” Blaise muttered. He stuck out his bottom lip and exaggerated nursing his hand.
Draco reached up to his neck and squeezed Ginny’s fingers. “You saved my gingerbread,” he said, making a fake sappy face that made Ginny giggle.

Now, THAT is something to be smug about!
Completely agree with Blaise!
They were made for each other, especially if she can already think that far ahead when it comes to him!
it just really amazed me!


Draco sighed. “If I remember correctly,” he said, “you were very much interested in this whole thing. In fact, you tricked him into realizing that I l-like her.”

OH!
Thank God he didn't say it!
Can you imagine knowing someone loves you not because he told you but because he was arguing about it?
NOT good!
Thank Malfoy ways for allowing him to be wuick in his thinking and holding back his tongue!


Blaise actually blushed. “Well, see… I could tell that Draco was in love with you…”
Draco nearly swallowed his tongue. His friend was going to be the death of him! Why on earth would he say that. Ginny seemed to be taking it in stride. Hardly seemed to notice Blaise’s unfortunate choice of words. Thank Merlin. For as much as Draco loved her, he really wanted her to find out in a better fashion than that, and certainly not so soon after getting together. Judging by the way she’d panicked when he kissed her, a profession of love might just ruin any chances completely.

Thankfully Draco agrees!
It is quite akward not to mention improper to have it said like this.
Blaise should get slapped or, in this case, a more manly approach like a small punch to the shoulder or a slap in the back of the head.



Ginny shivered as his fingers trailed up her spine. Her breathing turned just the slightest bit ragged and her eyelids started to flutter. It made Draco feel distinctly powerful to know that he had this sort of effect on her. Just a brush of his fingers and she turned to jelly. Granted, she could do the exact same thing to him. On top of giving him ideas he’d never had with other women.
Ideas like settling down. He could easily see himself living a quiet life with Ginny by his side. Something he’d never seen himself desiring. A happy vision of him and Ginny sitting down together with two or three children came to the front of his mind.

AAAAAAAWWWWWW!!!
he's getting soft!
he's all mush over her!
=D
i'm so glad he already has thoughts about the future.
it didn't take a pregnancy, sex or somet coaxing from her.
He's already thinking of it and much further.
=)
it's really sweet!



He twisted around and wrapped his arms around her before she could settle back into her own seat, giving a slight tug so that she fell sideways across his lap with a surprised squeak.
Ginny huffed and wriggled into a more comfortable position, rightly guessing that his arms locked around her middle meant that she would not be getting up any time soon. “You’ve always been a right prat, you know, and it seems to be getting worse.” Even though she sounded put out, her eyes were twinkling. She wrapped her own arms around his neck and kissed his chin.

Have i mentioned for the thousandth time that i LOVE possessive Draco?
because i do, i really do!
And you put him here so well.
Plus, he's all gropy now and holding her, kissing, nuzzling and doing all the things a Malfoy doesn't usually do.
he's all prim and propper with others, but he completely forgets about it when it comes to her and just thinks of being with her and doing everything he wants and that make her happy!
^;^
He's so perfect!!!
by the way...LOVED the kiss chin! i used to do that to my boyfriend all the time!
;P



“Be nice, Malfoy,” Ginny reprimanded with a little pinch on his shoulder.

I really, REALLY think she should have given him a little bite to the shoulder instead of a pinch.
then a kiss, a smiling face and then rested her head in his shoulder.






This was simply wonderful chapter!
So sweet and fluffy and we got to see them as a real couple.
He's very sweet with her and gets a little soft, but doesn't forget his Malfoy ways.
i just love how in love Draco acts!
MORE MORE MORE!
Please don't keep the chapter from me anymore!
*pouts*

OOOOOHH!
By the way, this chapter just REALLY made me want to ask you for something!
How willing are you to giving me a gift?
[Although i have nothing to give back =/ ]


Amazing chapter sweetie, i simply love how sweet he got and groppy Draco is just somethign else.
They had some really hot moments there and i absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE their interaction as a couple!
^;~


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Author's Response: What sort of gift are you thinking? And why did I feel suddenly on guard when you asked me that? Is it just because I know you, or should I actually be worried? 'You have found my weak spot! I LOOOOVE, absolutely LOVE kitchen scenes! i completely agree with Draco's point of view, either man or woman look really sex while cooking. i loved the apron to accentuate her curves and the messy knot in her hair is just really sexy! [is there any chance we[and by that i mean ME] will have more kitchen scenes, especially in other fics????]' There will most probably be more kitchen scenes in future stories as they are also a weakness of mine! ;) I don't really know why I love them so much, but I really really do! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Next one will be posted tomorrow!

hehe.
yes,typical me,, always asking for more chapter!
;P

=O
you can't write smut!
=OO
What a waste of your talents!
Tell that silly brin to stop shutting down!
Such a wonderful writer with an amazing way for words should NOT shut down!
You need to be able to at least write smut-ish scenes.
You're too brilliant to NOT write a love scene!
Something truly in te romantic side, not in the naughty side.
Like Reiko Naoe did in Serpent's bride.
Go read it if you haven't already.
it's a complete love scene, you don't even know they are talking about sex, for me that's one of the top fics, a true CLASSICAL!


WHAT???!!!
Your giggls of embarrassment will soon turn into a shrieking girl running around with another one[namely me] chasing her down!

that means we only get 4 chapters!!!!
NOOOOOO!!!!!
i can't!
it's too little!
I'll go crazy!

please don't tell me that's all there is!





ok...
*breathes in*
*breathes out*
*breathes in*
*breathes out*
*breathes in*
*breathes out*

How about if it's not enough and i promisse i'll be fair about this one, i'll even call my sister[she's the one who got the good senses and not even a little bit of craziness] and ask her to judge if the ending is right or we need more...
Anyway, if the ending is not enough then you wrte one more chapter just to end things smoothly?
i know with the way you wrte it won't be necessary and you'll do the perfect hppy eding of a fairytale turn true, but i just wanna be sure you'll give me more if this time is not so.
What you say?
Deal?



[i think i may have multiple personality desorder triggered by reading...]
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Author's Response: Lol! All of your personalities are crazy, though, so it's not too bad that you've developed multiples. ;) Are you sure your sister isn't crazy? She is related to you, after all... Anyway... I might be biased, but I think that the epilogue after the next four chapters is an absolutely perfect way to end the story, so I doubt there will be much need for begging more chapters.

He barely even made eye contact with her, preferring instead to glare at the wall, a livid expression marring his perfect, angular features. “Apologize,” he scoffed. “We’ve both received owls from St. Mungo’s. I’m sure yours is the same as mine, so I’ll just tell you.” He sounded bitter, biting each word off harshly. “As we were both so opposed to this arrangement at the beginning, the administration has been keeping their eyes open for a replacement. Apparently they’ve found one and she’ll be here on Monday to take over your duties.”

NOOOOOOO!!!!
=OOO

I sure didn't see that one coming!
but he deserves it!
i sure like to protect Draco but he deserves to be left alone and the next nurse should put no flavouring in his potions and be a nasty old shrew.
i hope she does everything, down to the clothes, different from Gin and that he hates her and feels lonely enough to suck it up and go after her.
Especially seeing as she has no place to live.
on that note: could she please find a crappy place to live instead of getting cozy with Harry and Hermione?
It would just be so much better!



Ginny shrugged and knelt on the hearth rug so she was on the same level as the other woman. “Well, maybe I was a little. But mostly I was angry at your son’s lack of reaction. It was like he didn’t care at all.”
Mrs. Malfoy nodded. “He did just sit there, didn’t he? A Malfoy through and through.”
For some reason, Ginny found herself confiding in Draco’s mother. She told her that they weren’t actually dating; only snogging. And that she was pretty sure Draco was only attracted to her physically, while she was very much in love with him.

Now THAT's the Cissa i know and love!
=D
i was really angry next chpter when she showed up as a nasty, bitter old lady with prejudices up to her hair.
I much prefer this one, the one who talks and listens, it's much much better!
=D


Mrs. Snidely was short and plump. The sort you would expect to see handing out candy in the children’s ward. She was wearing a drab grey dress and simple black flats. Her mouse hair was short and tidy and she wore a pair of spectacles on her nose. All in all, she was a very unremarkable-looking woman. “Where is the patient?” she asked in a bossy, busy-sounding voice.
Ginny instantly hated her. “You are to call him Mr. Malfoy,” she snapped.
Mrs. Snidely raised her eyebrow. “Dear, I will call him whatever you want when he shows me respect. Honestly! To not even welcome me himself! Sending the hired help! Disgraceful!”

YAY!
She's a nasty old shrew!!!
Shes but ugly and thinks too much of herself.
i'm sad Ginny left her with potions made by herslef, but sure glad she was completely professional as to explain the rules of the house.
plus, it's grrrreat to know she lef the old hag to brew his migraine potion!
He sure gonna hate that one!
BRILLIANT!!!
^;^


If she left, it was highly unlikely she would ever see him again. She’d be moving into her own flat in two days and he didn’t know. She’d opted not to have a Floo connection since she lived in a Muggle building, so even if he got his head on straight and tried to find her, he wouldn’t be able.

PHEW!
That's a relief!
I'm glad she doesn't have to stay over with friends.
And i'm happy she's in a place which is hard to find and can only be reached by muggle ways.
We'll have less chances of him trying to bribe her with expensive gifts and he'll have to actually work hard to reach her.
plus, that leaves room for a terrible migraine attack, as he's tying to figure out how to find her muggle way.
^;^
YEs, i can be evil when it comes to Draco[but only when he deserves it!]



Draco leaned against the wall, looking his usual, nonchalant self. “What I don’t understand,” he said calmly, “is how you can be so angry at me, and still be worried about my well being, as you put it.”
Feeling incredibly tired of this whole thing, Ginny raised her eyes to his. “Don’t read into it, Malfoy,” she replied blankly. She stood up and patted her pocket to ensure her shrunken luggage was still there. “Well, goodbye then.” With that she turned and headed to the fireplace.
“Gin, wait,” Draco said quickly, pushing off the wall and taking several steps after her. “Please don’t leave like this.”
“Like what?” Ginny cried, feeling the now-familiar prickle of tears behind her eyelids as she looked back at him. “Heartbroken? Feeling stupid for thinking you and I could actually work? Or am I just overreacting?”
She shook her head and threw a pinch of Floo powder into the fire, stepping in as the flames flared green. “Goodbye, Draco.” She shouted, “Weasleys’ Wizard Wheezes!” and braced herself for the spinning sensation. The last thing she saw before whisking away was Draco’s miserable face staring back at her.

I've got a HUGE lump on my throat and i read this last bit completely from Ginny's point of view.
by the time i reach the good bye i was dropping a few tears and feeling a HUGE need too cry.
it was a very difficult scene, i could really put myself in Ginny's shoes and in a way, i did.
it felt awful!




Thank you for this chapter!
It was wonderfully well written and charged with emotion.
i'm glad cissa came around and that the othr nurse is as bad as i thought.
Please send the next hapter tonight!
i can't wait to see what comes next!
I'm dying of curiosity!

Thank you very very much for this...some things turned out right and other worng, but the wrong was just right and i dunno f it makes any sense, but i'm glad it happened!
=D


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Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I agree with you that Narcissa is much better like this. I love the stories where she's more of the kindly, motherly-ish sort of person. I was going to keep her completely proud and uncaring through the entire story, but I got to this chapter and she just naturally turned into this character. It actually turned out to make the epilogue easier to write. I cried, myself, when I wrote the goodbye. I get so involved with my characters when I'm writing and I feel all of the emotions that they're feeling so I could literally feel Ginny's heart crumbling in her chest as the Floo pulled her out of the manor and she saw Draco looking back at her and she was thinking this was the end of it. I made myself cry when I wrote When No One Else Was Looking, as well. It makes for much better writing when I put myself in the character's spot, but it also creates a bit of an emotional ride. Like when I wrote The End at the last page of WNOEWL... I couldn't write for at least a week. Anyway, now that I've rambled on and on... Thank you for your review and I'll have the next chapter this weekend!

=OOO
i can't believe it!
=''(

fire her and screw up all her of job pssibilities!

GGGGRRRRRR!
I'm mad at that nasty shrew!

Can the nightbus please kill her?
or maybe Draco should anish her form the manor and send her to a train trail and then the train will roll on top of her and she'll die a blooy bloody death!
Plus a painful one!

gorry, i know.
but i like the idea...


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Author's Response: Lol! You really don't like her, huh? Good, that was the idea.

please tell me this isn't one shot
and we could also use the scene before anyone arrived...
This was really great!
=)
NOW i know what to do if i have someone in my bedroom covered in chocolate and my family arrives.
=P


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Author's Response:

Sorry, this is it. I find myself both incapable and uninclined to write smut - which the preceding scene would definitely have at least SOME of (though they did, as we know, get interrupted). ;)

Heh, I don't know if it's the best excuse out there... But certainly one of the more amusing ones, in my opinions.

Thank you for the review; I'm glad you enjoyed reading.

How is it that EVERYTIME you write something it's just brilliant and addicting?
You're a genious!
I loved this1
cna't wait for more!
=D

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Author's Response: I think I love you.

*evil grin*
i loved this!
Specially this sentence: If the road to hell was paved with good intentions, then maybe the road to paradise was paved with ill intent.
you're amazing as always!
Thank you for this...althouguh i would have a cookie or at least add a memory like chapter where we could see what happened before this episode ;)

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Author's Response: Thank you. It took a while to come up with that line. I'll try to write a prequal if the plot bunnies will cooperate.

Why would you feel guilty about the smut?
o.O

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Author's Response: Midwestern guilt. I should be baking an apple pie rather than writing about D and G going at it on a table.

She is very young for Draco to notice her in that way
i think that is part of the fun/pitty thing[much like watching a kid falling and as they don't get hurt really badly we actually laugh at the cuteness pity of it all]

Crabbe is definately stupider than Goyle!
=P

Oh i can't wait for the next chapter of walk like an egyptian!
It was really esciting!
;D

What are you recovering from?
What happened?


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Author's Response: Haha, that's a nice way to sum it up. Yes, it is part of the fun/pity thing. It's not that it would be wrong of him to notice her in that way, but it just wouldn't really occur to him to notice her in that way.

Ah, just recovering from several late nights, as well as last night's very long celebrations. Anyway, I'm working on the next chapter of WLAE right now. Turns out I'm not as tired now as I was this morning.

WOW!!!
Where are YOU from?
around 13 or 14 we are just starting to play truth or dare and the dare is all set up to male you kiss someone you like...the truth is a set up as well, to make you confess who you've kissed and who you WANT to kiss.
;P
Not all thet fair in our games,huh?


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Author's Response: New Zealand. Everything is lax here.

i loved his!
it was so sweet!
finally Draco did something!
Poor Giiny,she was so scared and longing
you portrited everything perfectly!
i loved it!

the end(the second one) was THE BEST!!!
i loved his question!!!
pitty we didn't get na answer
^^
really great work!

i wanna read Draco's point of view!
but only after WLAE
;)

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Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, I leave you to decide what the answer was. I think Ginny most likely would have just hit him and then kissed him. Or she would have hit him, and then he would have kissed her.

I've got four pages written of chapter two for WLAE. Shouldn't be too long now. ^_^