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Registered: Aug 18, 2006
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Beta/ beta-reader/ Avid reviewer, always have a coment about everythign i read, not alwayas nice, but try to be constructive!
=)
I love D/G and romance so i like the fics where in the end everything turns out ok for them. Without one or both dying.

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In Which Draco Malfoy is Jealous of a House by Boogum    (Reviews - 16)

Everyone has at least one rival. Draco Malfoy's just happened to be a house.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: The Married Life of Draco Malfoy
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1540 | Read count: 4811 | Published: Nov 29, 2009 | Updated: Nov 29, 2009
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Draco Malfoy is Jealous of a House

oh yeah, using the hints left by Nutmeg44...it's great appetizer for WLAE [my personal favorite from your uncompleted works]
a sequel to rock the boat would require at least definately naughty rating and so i'm not so sure how you feel about that
and marriage of convenience would be really great as well seeing as i'm looking forward to the week at the Malfoy's!
^;^

kisses

Author's Response: Hrm.... if I do write the sequel to RtB, it will be more implied rather than seen. I probably would rate it at Definitely Naughty, but it wouldn't be anything graphic. I'm not even at the point where I can consider that, though. I have way too much going on at the moment, as well as fics to be written. AMoC will be the next thing updated.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Draco Malfoy is Jealous of a House

Hehe, i always like to think of Lucius and Cissa with a full function sex life, like they are still newlyweds.
=)
And i absolutely love it![it's the only parental sex i accept]
So yes, i understand why he doesn't want to share his manor!
^;~

Why are you hiding fics up your sleeve???
That's just plain MEAN!
Stop talking to Lia! She's turning you into a mean little witch!!!

Hehe, my aunt is spoling me with delicious goodies because i've been studying a lot!
^.^

Don't tell me she wasn't pregnant!
She was pregnant and i'm sticking to it!
;p


kisses

Author's Response: Same here, which is why I don't think they would like to share their house. *grins*

I have a lot hiding up my sleeve. :P But, really, it's just because I don't want to upload them all at once and have an FIA overload. *laughs* They'll all be uploaded eventually, though.

What are you studying for? And good luck!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Draco Malfoy is Jealous of a House

not TOO implicity i hope!
^;~
I don't want somethign overly graffic just on the lines of "A Malfoy in the closet", really heated kisses and clothes coming off are good enough tjust to see what happened between the
^.^

I'm glad about AMoC but what about WLAE???
It's my baby, you know?
^;~

kisses

Author's Response: Lol. It wouldn't be too implicit. Maybe a bit 'heavier' than A Malfoy in the Closet. Basically you'd know enough without all the really dirty details. ^_~

Well, if I can finish this Christmas challenge and Rowan's b'day present, you have my word that I will work on WLAE after that. I might give myself a deadline for it. That always works for me.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Draco Malfoy is Jealous of a House

Oh yeah, leave it up to us to make their relationship sound so much naughtier!
^;~

Oh yeah, don't overload but please post them!
Especially one shots[of course i'm gonna ask for more chapters but still...]

Vestibular.It's a HUUUUGE difficult test that allows me to get into a wonderful university!
;D


kisses

Author's Response: The majority are oneshots, though I have a few chaptered ones that need to be uploaded.

Ah, you have my sympathies. I hate tests like that. I'm so glad my country doesn't make us go through them. Good luck with that. ^_^

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Draco Malfoy is Jealous of a House

YAY!
NOW we're talking!
You should know you just threw yourself into the lion's den, or at least into the annoying little kid's den.
;P

I'll make sure to bug you about it as many time as i can.
Just like i do with WLAE!
;)

kisses

Author's Response: *looks wary* Perhaps I should have considered that one before pledging myself. I guess I'll just have to make sure I stick to my word. :P

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Draco Malfoy is Jealous of a House

OOOHH!!!
DEFINATELY upload them!
;D

Well, i don't ACTUALLY like the tests but it's good because we get to enjoy a lot of High school because we only have to ACTUALLY study right before these tests!
;P

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which Draco Malfoy is Jealous of a House

You're toast sweeite!
I'm gonna bug you just about as much as i do to Lia[poor thing is about to go insane]

You'll stick to it, i'm sure!
;D


kisses

Saving Ginny Weasley by Ahranne    (Reviews - 20)

It had been six months since Ginny and Malfoy had set off to Brazil to track down alleged dark activity deep within the Amazon Rainforest. Over three months since anyone had had contact with them. Mrs. Weasley had been frantic upon learning that no one had heard from her baby in a month, but the Ministry had assured everyone that they were trained Aurors and the best in their field, and that they were probably lying low and trying not to draw attention to themselves. A month after that even the Aurors had started to get anxious, rumbling that the disappearance of Weasley and Malfoy confirmed their suspicions of deeply dark activity in the South Americas.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2422 | Read count: 1260 | Published: Nov 30, 2009 | Updated: Dec 08, 2009
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I sincerily hope that " Malfoy and Weasley AREN'T on the brink of death at the hands of escaped Death Eaters when they find them"!!!!
^;~
As for your informations about Brazil and the Amazon, they are correct so far. I'm brazilian and i've been to Amazon,Pará and Acre [all of which have parts of amazon forest] sevral times over the years so i would know about culture and anythign else[in case you want a pointer of some sort just let me know].
one thing that is incredibly annoying about that region is not exactly mud but dry leaves scattered all over the floor holding water. Mosquitoes at all times and your skkin always feels clamy like you're having goosebumps and sweating at the same time, it's really disgusting and when you finally get in the water(igarapés-rivers that can start really thin and go really wide with trees in the middle of it) you never wanna leave, it feels wonderful!
An interisting thing about igarapés is that there are crabs in the bottom so when you lie down on the water floating you can hear their paws clicking and there are huge snakes in most of the igarapés.
I knwo this is just miscellanious but i've only seen very few fics about brazil and there are some really wrong things about it, so i just wanna offer you 24/7 support!
;D


I'm really enjoying this partnership,it's sure to bring us far too many laughs!Great thinking!
I can't wait to see Draco and Ginny!


kisses

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the info AND the review! :) It will definitly help me, and if I have any questions I'll let you know! xo

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i'm kind of a country enthusiastic!
i love the amazon region so i was really excited when i saw this.
i've read your other fics before and i really enjoy your writiing.i'm gonna go with jacktamara on this one and say that i can't wait for the juicy part!
there are those floating cabins in some secluded small areas that are just gorgeous!!!
perfect for a night of passionite romance.
although i love the bickering first as a heated weird foreplay so don't just jump to the sack now
;P

oh yeah,do you think you could change the rating to extremely naughty?
i loved what you did to a lingering glimpse and it would be great here
;)
just something to think about

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

=DDD
I loved this!!!
I love the whole nurse/patient thing
Some of my favorite fics include non-magical ways to do things so the fact that they are wandless is also a favorite for me!
^;~

GRRRREAT job!
Please don't take so long updating again!


Not to be a bitch or anything[ugh i hate when i do these things], but they are in Colombia or Venezuela by now.
These caves don't happen in bbrazillian amazon.
There is this one thing that happens and it's so much better than a simple cave but no one talks about.
We have these very deep rivers and they have this thing caleld gruta, which is a big cave, underwater.
To get there is necessary to dive and when you come up you're inside this huge air bubble!
That's the gruta!
And it's simply magical in there, some of them have sun hole that light up the entire thing!
THey are gorgeous!
Plus they'd both be soaked and have to get out of the wet clothes, so it would be good for the fic
;P

I'm finding this fic so amazing!
I'm completely taken!
please tell me we'll have more chapters soon!!



kisses

Author's Response: I love your enthusiasm! Sorry about the caves - it just seemed to work that way in my brain. Hopefully it wasn't too off-putting! I love your descriptions of the Amazon ... makes me want to hop on a plane and get down there ASAP :P My final exams start tomorrow, so I actually don't have the next chapter started - there will be one, but not for at least a week (I'm done exams on Monday, which will give me MUCH more time for writing!) I'll have to get your input about any more Brazillian details I use in the story :) Thanks again! xoxo

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH *sighs of relief*
YOu took a boulder off my shoulder, i was so scared you'd be mad at me for worming around your details and being a bitch to the image you have.
We're on the same college situation then, i have a big test tomorrow and HUGE test on sunday and the last one on Monday.


I was just remembering the last indiana jones movie, where there were HUGE waterfalls and he was menat to be in the amazon, but that was a lie actually, it's a very low place so we have short waterfalls, in the movie he was way down south in Brazil, a place called Foz do Iguaçu which is beautiful but the water is so SO cold!

Thank you for not being mad at me and enjoying the reviews!
;)
And good luck with your tests!


kisses

No Rhyme or Reason by Persephone33, Mynuet    (Reviews - 58)

This is a series of (eventually) one hundred scenes from the lives of Draco and Ginny. There is no overarching theme; each of these "chapters" is a stand alone ficlet. Some of them might go together, but we make no promises.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era, Next Generation, Past AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 28 | Word count: 37331 | Read count: 36777 | Published: Dec 02, 2009 | Updated: Feb 27, 2010
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Lost

cute=Malfoy translation: 'It's horrific in every way conceivable, and I can't believe you brought me here,

this was brilliant!
Should make a fic just of Malfoy translations, i'm sure they would catch!
^;~
"Where are we?"

"Lost," he said cheerfully. "It'll be a journey. We can bond."
"I knew you'd come around," she said confidently.

"Yes, well." He gave her arse a squeeze and smiled at her fondly. "Do I get shagged now?"

"I suppose yes," she relented, kissing his neck. "You do."

Incredibly sweet!
=D
i loved it!

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Office

*evil grin*
i know it's hopeless to ask but can't you make an extremely naghty fic continuing this one???

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Sign

This serie inside the seire was definately the best part.
I loved the other ones and wish most of them continued, but this one ACTUALLY did, plus thy had all the suffering they could have and so now is just the happy times!
=D
I was on the verge of tears thinking Draco had died and Ginny was going to burn to death!
It was a pretty mean cliff yu left there!

AMAZING writing, but then again, i could expect nothing less coming from 2 of the best authors here,right?
^;^
please tell me there's more to it and you'l continue it soon!

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jan 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Truth

AAAAAWWWW!
I love this!!!
=DD

I really think we should see what happened before the game and what will happen to her when she gets home tonight!
^;~

kisses

Seven Deadly by VickyVicarious    (Reviews - 74)

Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy are on a downward spiral, religiously speaking.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 7 | Word count: 10953 | Read count: 26914 | Published: Dec 03, 2009 | Updated: Jan 11, 2010
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Envy

poor Ginny!
Having her being friends with Astoria seems oddly acceptable since the girl is just so beautiful and pure but honestly i just want her and Draco come to a mutual ending of things so she won't be sad.
But most of all i wish that Ginny would suffer more of these pranks, played by different people, and in one of them she would get hurt and only have Draco to help her or that they would end up trapped together in a weird, akward situation where they didn't have the chance to use magic.
^;^

It was a good start and it promisses a lot of cuteness and fluff so i hope you update soon[i just hate to wait forever for an update]
;D


kisses

Author's Response:

I'm glad you don't mind the relationship with Astoria. Of course she's not perfect but I wanted to have her as a sort-of rival without being an evil b- er, witch. I meant witch. ...So I thought friendship would be the way to go.

While there won't be any more pranks from the Weasley twins in this, you can expect poor Ginny to suffer a bit more at the hand of a certain wicked Slytherin. And there will in fact be one scene where she and Draco are trapped together. It will be both weird and awkward, though probably not in the way you're imagining.

And that one will take a while. But I hope you enjoy the rest along the way too, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Envy

yes, friendship worked perfectly!
=)

OH pity!
no more pranks
;P

OOOOHHH, i loved your wickedness
please make Ginny suffer some more, things will only get brighter then!
^;~

TRAPPED together???
It's ALWAYS good!

I'm sure i'll enjoy this fic!
=)
And i'll be reviewing the next chapters as soon as they are out!
;D

kisses

Author's Response:

Don't worry about the pranks. This latest chapter should show you some wickedness/suffering I'm sure you'll appreciate. ;)

Speaking of which, it's loading and should be up as soon as it's approved. I can't wait to hear what you think!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Envy

I'll be sure to review as soon as i read it...well maybe i'll wait a little because i tend to send reviews like
"OOOHHH it's finally here, i'm so happy, it's so great, it's too short, when is the next chapter coming up???"
So yeah, kinda crazy if i like the fic, and then i send another more composed one
I'll read it, wait for the excitment to disappear and then sen da review!
;P

kisses

Author's Response: Hahaha, I'm very familiar with that whole syndrome. Sure thing. :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Pride

Draco makes everything worse by leaning in closer and placing a finger over her lips. He takes a quick step closer and twirls a strand of her hair in his fingers, leans his head close and whispers seductively in her ear: “I wouldn’t like to see my girlfriend looking so upset any longer.”

o leans even closer, so that he is whispering in her ear, and she can feel his warm breath puffing as he draws out his words. “That’s right. I’m asking…

THIS was SO "drive me crazy and make my heart want to jump out of my chest!"



i was holding my breath when he started to lean in closer...i was holding my breath from the moemnt he approhed her but aroun the time he got to close to be polite i just stopped breathing!



But why do you look so shocked, Weasley? Oh!” he gasps in amusement. “Surely you didn’t think it was you?”

this was SOOOOO mean!!!!
pooor Gin!

But the bright side is...REVENGE!!!!!
I can't wait to see what she's going to do...tease him? Make him jealous? Showing him what he's missing?

^;^
This is AMAZING!!!!
=DDD

kisses

Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you liked it so much! I have to admit that I had a lot of fun writing Evil!Draco. I usually just stick with Snarky!Draco but this time he was very naughty. Don't worry though, Ginny will fix him eventually. As for HOW... you'll find out soon, I promise!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Envy

Hehe!
Evil, sanrly sweet...the important part is DRACO!
;P
OOOHHHH!
I hhope your SOON is closer than a week from today!
;P
Can't wait!!!


kisses

Author's Response: :) Thanks, the last update won't take long.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Avarice

And of course she carries with her the added bonus of severely angering Potter & Co., though to be honest that’s never the first thing on Draco’s mind when he sees her. Or even in the top ten, really.

This was so sweet!
^;^



The Weasley knows he knows that she likes him. And she also knows that he knows that she knows that he knows she likes him. Add this up with her friendly attitude towards Astoria and pretense that Draco doesn’t exist, and it’s clear: she’s blaming him.

Oh yeah!
VERY clear!
;p


“I just wanted to let you know that I’m breaking up with you.”

“That’s nice, I – ” Draco stops. Suddenly. “What?”


HEHEHE
I LOOOOVED his reaction!!!!


And now she is laughing. With Ginny Weasley.

...He questioned her being in Slytherin why, exactly?

Hehe, Astoria's sweet way make us wonder but then she makes it clear as to why she's here.


Gin and Astoria were planning this while he was scheeming all by himslef!!
poor guy!
He doesn't stand a chance against Gin!
;P


REALLY great!
When will the other chapter be out??
^;~

kisses

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you had so much fun with all these lines. I love it when people quote favorite lines to me. :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Sloth

“But then I started to notice how he was acting – you know, smirking at you all the time, and you blushing. So then I had to go talk to you, and once you told me you liked him and he was just trying to embarrass you –”
“I told you no such thing!” Ginny snaps. “I had no idea you had any ulterior motives in dating Draco – I would never have told you I liked your boyfriend!”
Astoria sighs. “Yes, well, I figured it out on my own then, didn’t I?


Hehe, thankfully she is a great friend and was not interested in him in that way otherwise she would just be really mad for noticing this!
i'm really glad you putted her POV this way!
it made everything way better!





At first, her gaze is triumphant and challenging. Then, as he continues to stare without saying or doing anything, she begins to grow uneasy. Still, he keeps her waiting, and it is only when she is about to say something herself just to break the heavy silence that he finally moves.
He hands her the photo. “Here,” he says, voice flat and expressionless, “You dropped this.”
Then he turns and leaves the hall. Ginny finds herself waiting desperately for the anger, for him to turn and glare at her, to say something vengeful, or even to pretend that he isn’t bothered by this at all – but nothing. He does nothing at all, but leave in silence, and soon the noise level is back to normal as the door shuts behind him.


POOR DRACO!!!
This was so so sad!
It makes me wish to go running into him and just hold him!
oh poor dear!
*pouts*


the only way Ginny sees to fix that is to verbally harass him for a bit, then kiss some sense into him. …Well, okay, there’s probably several other ways to do it, but Ginny likes this one best.

Don't we all just like this plan best?
*evil grins*

HEHE
I really enjoyed this although i am so very sad for Drakie-poo!
And i am absolutley dying of curiosity here to find out what he has up is sleeve[coy Draco=Cunning Draco and no one can convince me otherwise ;P].
Plus i wanna see waht gin is gonna do and more importantly what's going to happen NOW!
just "Hi" and leave is not an option!


When is the next one coming up?
^;~



kisses

Author's Response: Yeah, although I hope that Astoria would have appreciated Ginny's point of view even if she really DID like Draco. And - well, it seems that you have seen straight through coy!Draco, huh? Of course he could never just lay down and be the victim. This is Draco Malfoy we're talking about. :)

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jan 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Envy

OOOHHHH!
GOOODY!
=DD

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jan 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Envy

HEHEHE
You'll enjoy my reviews then1
I love quoting, when i know the fic and i like it, i write the review while reading, so sometimes i'll guess right on what's going to happen and other times i go completely away from the reality so when you read you'll think: Didn't she read all the way through???
so now you know that it's only because i like quoting and reviewing!
^;^

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jan 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Envy

HEHEHE!
I do have some sort of undying,crazy love for Draco!
;P
Most ofmy reviews are mostly about him, unless ther characters REALLY do something great[and of course i love Ginny]

I'm so excited about the next chapter!
=D

kisses