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Real name: Marcia
Registered: Dec 27, 2005
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Don't Wake Me From This Dream by andromeda77    (Reviews - 87)

It's his last summer holiday before leaving Hogwarts and Draco is in agony over missing Ginny. A wonderful discovery in his father's library gives him the power to be with her...but who will pay the price for the ghastly mistake he overlooks?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 31 | Word count: 72063 | Read count: 84100 | Published: Jan 13, 2005 | Updated: May 26, 2006
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Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Mar 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Sleepless Nights

I'd given up on this story and am sooooo delighted to see that you're continuing it. I just reread it all. Such a pleasure! Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments. It means a lot. ;)

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Mar 04, 2006 Title: Chapter 30: The Circular Room

Yes, definitely write more...it's a wonderful story!

Author's Response: Thank you for the comments. I won\'t abandon the story, I\'ve just been so busy and had little time to focus on it like it deserved. But I\'m working on finishing as well as posting some other things.

Secrets and Shadows by Thalia    (Reviews - 17)

Heaven knew when he could see her again. But there was too much danger, and with the war-torn world, there could only be coded letters delivered by others, and hope for a better future. DG with minor ships.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 5758 | Read count: 909 | Published: Mar 02, 2005 | Updated: Sep 26, 2005
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Date: Mar 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Ignorance is Pain

Thalia!

I just found this wonderful story and am wondering if you plan to update it. You said that it's complete but haven't posted a chapter since 9/05. Do you have it posted somewhere else where we can read it? Thanks!
Marcia

A Trying Breath by Ephemere    (Reviews - 131)

A horrifying experience has been pushed aside, and people try to get on with their normal lives. But that experience soon turns into distant memories. Distant memories soon turn into haunting nightmares. When nightmares turn into reality, what can a certain group of Hogwarts students do to keep a certain redhead from slipping away? D/G story you've never quite seen before. Contains trips to the library, snogging, unexpected romance, and dreaming Gryffindors.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 70478 | Read count: 48555 | Published: Mar 05, 2005 | Updated: Jun 05, 2008
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Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Mar 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Forbidden Fudge

Please update. Please. Please. PLEASE!!! I just reread this for the third time and am dying to read the rest. Thank you!

Author's Response: third time! oh wow! haha trust me, and you really should trust me on this, it\'s on its way :)

Primrose Path by Adelagia    (Reviews - 196)

Ginny, Draco, Quidditch, and entirely too close quarters. Being forced to train, play, and live with Draco for a season gives Ginny a whole new understanding of and appreciation for the amazing bouncing ferret. Ginny's POV.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 18937 | Read count: 44950 | Published: Apr 19, 2005 | Updated: May 23, 2007
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Date: Mar 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Very nice story! More, please!! and soon!

Seriously, thank you.

Quidditch by fallenwitch    (Reviews - 160)

Draco Malfoy inadvertently comes to Ginny Weasley's assistance during a game of Quidditch. The reverberations from his actions will rock his world for some time to come. Snarky Humor and Romance.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 16487 | Read count: 55142 | Published: May 03, 2005 | Updated: Jun 07, 2005
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Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Feb 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: A Fucking Pickup Game Of Quidditch, For God's Sake

I can't believe that I never reviewed this story! I remember discussing it with you. Oh, maybe over at Portkey! Anyway, I love it and thank you for it. You've done an especially good job of accurately depicting them as teenagers. That's not easy. Fearthainn also achieves that and you are the only two writers I think do it so realistically.

Treason! by Sarea Okelani    (Reviews - 69)

Draco Malfoy learns that some mornings, he should just stay in bed.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 5533 | Read count: 10598 | Published: May 20, 2005 | Updated: May 20, 2005
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Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Nov 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Treason!

EXCELLENT!!!! SO WELL DONE! WHAT AN EXPERT YOU ARE!

Friends in Low Places by Nola Ryan    (Reviews - 22)

Ginny Weasley is not the only one affected by the destruction of The Chamber of Secrets and Tom Riddle's diary. But out of the painful fallout of those events an unlikely connection is made. This connection -- dare they call it a friendship? -- will dramatically alter the lives of Ginny and Draco Malfoy. They'll learn the hard way, though, that changing your path in life leads to challenges that even the strongest bonds may not survive.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 41571 | Read count: 24165 | Published: Sep 09, 2005 | Updated: Mar 05, 2007
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Date: Apr 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: There's Talk of Dragons

Nola,
Excellent story. Quite yummy and very very well written. I was not surprised to see that you make a living by writing. Your competence shines through. Please, please keep writing and posting this story. Are there any other d/g's you have hidden away or have posted on any other sites?

Kudos! Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Marcia

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Apr 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: The Past is Prologue

One other thing: it always puzzles me that Lucius being cruel/abusive to Draco or Narcissa is a staple of fanfic. There's no evidence for it in canon that I can see and, quite to the contrary, Lucius seems to dote on Draco. Hmmm.........

Oh, another thing. The Hogwart's shield says, "Draco Dormiens Nunquam Titillandus" which means something like 'don't wake a sleeping dragon'. Could that be a reference to Draco's 'awakening' a la Paul Atreides in Dune and helping to save the day in book 7?
Marcia

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words, Marcia. Sorry, I have no other hidden D/G stories -- this is my first foray into HP fic, after years of writing in the Emergency! fandom. As for Lucius\' abusive nature, I based it on the way he treats Draco in \"Chamber\" when they\'re in Borgin and Burke\'s. (He\'s snarking about Draco not doing as well as Hermione.)Maybe it was my own personal experience coming into play, but I thought that verbal abuse such as that could very easily turn to physical abuse. I like your theory about the Hogwarts crest foreshadowing Draco\'s awakening and possible salvation. I hope to see it happen in book 7! Peace! Nola

Vineyard Summer by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 387)

Ginny Weasley is sent to stay with her grandparents until the war ends, as her parents want to keep her out of harm's way. Her grandparents have another guest, another person in hiding, and a relationship quickly blossoms between them. However, with the war and so many secrets around them, Ginny isn't sure how to make it work. Fluffy occasionally, but things can't always be perfect, can they? Decisions have to be made and consequences dealt with.

For a fleeting moment, she imagined that they would never hear from their families again, that they would remain together in Tuscany until they were old and gray, with great-grandchildren. Much to her surprise, the thought didn’t make her as sad as she thought it should.

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 23 | Word count: 123807 | Read count: 65503 | Published: Sep 24, 2005 | Updated: Jul 25, 2011
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Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Oct 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: All The Things That I Wanted To Say

I didn't review the last chapter because the violence disturbed me and seemed very out of character with what you've shown us of Draco up until then. I think the story called for fluffy for the last chapter and instead it was populated with all sorts of dark themes: Ulrich, pimp...

Author's Response: Thanks for your honesty. The story did start off very fluffy & while I'm sure it will have a happy ending, things are going to get bleaker for a bit!

A Ferrety Response by archirat    (Reviews - 93)

I'm in a pet store, a MUGGLE pet store, and they still find me.
Well, it figures with the way my life has been turning out recently. With my luck I'll end up being Harry fucking Potter's pet ferret. Bugger. --Draco Malfoy
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Action, Drama
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2283 | Read count: 6664 | Published: Oct 03, 2005 | Updated: Oct 14, 2005
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Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: In which the Hero gets a bath and some rather disturbing images stuck in his head.

How adorable! And how original! Are you going to continue on with it? You haven't updated since November and that's usually a sign that a writer's abandoned a story or is stuck or having some other sort of problem. Are you still in need of a beta?

This is well worth continuing. Let your readers know you plans.

Gratefully,
Marcia

Author's Response: Sorry, I do have issues with betas, or actually the lack thereof... but i do plan on continuing the story. If anything the story itself is compelling enough for me to want to continue it. Thank you.

Along Came A Wizard by fallenwitch    (Reviews - 642)

A bet, a wanted witch, and a magical contract land Draco in a most unexpected situation. Can his Slytherin soul survive intact or will he succumb to one redheaded witch in bondage? Snarky humor, romance, and a pinch of angst. “I don’t want it. I didn’t order it. Now leave me the fuck alone.” He slammed the door closed. Only it didn’t close due to the enormous boot wedged into its threshold. One loud grunt later and it flung back open, almost hitting him in the face. Draco reflexively leaned back, and that’s when she was thrust into his unsuspecting arms.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 18 | Word count: 46917 | Read count: 43914 | Published: Nov 29, 2005 | Updated: Jan 18, 2007
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Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Mar 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: That Piece of Trash

Thank you! Very hard to predict what will come next. I think that's good: not predictible. More, more!!! Marcia

Also, if you've temporarily given up on Breaking His Heart, how about another chapter of The Slytherin's Witch? That's a great story too.

As long as I'm at it, I'd be curious to get your opinion on a couple of thoughts I've had about Draco. First, the Hogwart's logo translates as don't wake a sleeping dragon. Could Draco be the hero about to awaken in the final book? Second, it's difficult for me to accept that Lucius would be all that awful to Draco. After all, what's left for Lucius if his only child is dead?
Marcia

Author's Response: Hi Marcia! Yes, I will take a break from this one and write another chapter or two of The Slytherin\'s Witch soon - very soon. I have been neglectful of that one but find the switching back and forth to be much more problematic than I original anticipated. With my recent writer\'s block on this one, I wanted to get to a good stopping point before breaking! Not sure what you are asking about Draco and Lucius. Email me with a clarification, and I would be more than happy to discuss my humble thoughts with you! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Mar 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: Balls of Steel

WoooHoooo!!!!! Yet another great chapter!! I, for one, do not believe for a moment that Ginny's 'marriage' was for any purpose other than to free Draco of the magical contract. Of course she loves him...how could she not!

Oh, in the following, did you mean 'masochist'? That he was torturing himself by looking at her picture?
"Draco found himself staring at that picture, unable tear his eyes away from it. Was he a sadist?"

Love, love, LOVED your stories, fw! More! NOW!!

xo,
Marcia
PS - I do beta for several people in the LOTR fandom and am an admin at quillsandink.com.

Author's Response: Hi Marcia! **blushes profusely** Yes, a masochist not a sadist!!! What was I thinking? Okay, I\'m the sadist - for what I am putting poor Draco through - and I guess I projected that onto him. For shame! Thanks for pointing that out!!! I just KNEW it! You do beta - I knew it!!! And an admin at quillsandink - hmmm... I will need to check out that site as I am almost internet illiterate. It\'s a miracle I managed to stumble onto this site! Remember what I said about getting back to The Slytherin\'s Witch? Well, it might not be quite as soon as I originally forecasted - sorry! Having too much fun with this one right now to stop, but I will. I promise. Thanks for your review and your support and your quick \'beta\'! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: May 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: The Minister's Wife

Ginny's back at Draco's!!! Yay!!!! Can't wait to read what your devious, devilish, clever little mind has in store for them/us. Thank you for the chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, Marcia! You are the best! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: May 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: The Minister's Wife

Ginny's back at Draco's!!! Yay!!!! Can't wait to read what your devious, devilish, clever little mind has in store for them/us. Thank you for the chapter!

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: May 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: The Minister's Wife

FW,
Ginny's back at Draco's!!! Yay!!!! Can't wait to read what your devious, devilish, clever little mind has in store for them/us. Thank you for the chapter! Marcia

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: May 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: The Minister's Wife

FW,
Ginny's back at Draco's!!! Yay!!!! Can't wait to read what your devious, devilish, clever little mind has in store for them/us. Thank you for the chapter! Marcia

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 14: His Kiss

This is a great chapter. Thank you for it!

You've revealed just enough of what's going on to keep us all on the edge of our chairs. Just how is this going to turn out? It's nice to read a story that's not predictable!

Author's Response: No, thank you, Marcia. If not for you, who knows what this chapter would have turned out like! -fallenwitch

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Aug 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 15: Crazy

I LOVE this story and I LOVE this chapter. It's so satisfying to see Ginny telling/showing Draco how much she loves him. Thankyouthankyou.

Author's Response: No, thank you, Marcia, for being such a wonderful friend and awesome, awsome beta! If you hadn\'t put up with two months of back and forth, back and forth, and back and forth, I do believe this fic would have crashed and died an untimely death! -fallenwitch

Keeping Christmas on the Death Train by Anise    (Reviews - 2336)

Two and a half years after his failure to kill Albus Dumbledore, Draco has long been accepted back into the ranks of the Death Eaters. He is still obsessively searching for the rebel Ginny Weasley, but he hides that secret well. When she is found one snowy December night, he smuggles her onto the Death Eaters? train with him. And he begins to learn that nothing will ever be the same again?

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Bestiality, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 119 | Word count: 422332 | Read count: 273104 | Published: Dec 14, 2005 | Updated: Nov 02, 2009
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Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Oh, so much to think about! Well, first things first.

Thank you for the frequent updates! It really makes a huge difference in terms of staying inside of the story.

I don't know if it was your intent, but I see the strength of the goddess as a central theme in this story. The power of women to change the world for the better, tilt it to the side of good. Hermione's motherlove for her half-dementor rape-child makes him into an individual capable of love. Then Ginny's use of her virginity and body to bend Draco towards her will and use him to defeat the greatest evil, Voldemort, and win the war. I don't understand why so many other reader seem to think that'd be a difficult sacrifice on her part. I think almost every female member of the order would have stepped up.

Anyway, great story! Always makes my day to find a chapter waiting to read with my morning coffee. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Anise! This story continues to be just absolutely fabulous and THANK YOU for it!

It is, however, agony to wait for updates, especially for long periods of time, and it really cuts into the narrative flow and the emotions/thoughts you've evoked in the reader to have long hiatuses [I checked Webster's. That's actually the plural!]. So, not just begging for more rapid updates [although that too!!], but actually sharing with you that the complex nature of this story in terms of both plot and feelings would be better served by a regular schedule of updates. [And I do I know you're not being paid and so we have no right to have any expectations whatsoever, but there is always a contract between reader and writer, a level of trust that they will be kind to one another.] xo! Marcia

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Anise, Where are you?! We're dying out here!!!!! Please let us know what's happening with you and your story. Thanks!

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Feb 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Sooooo Bella! Kudos, Anise! That came out of the blue!! ;^) Marcia

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wonderful chapter! I'm so ready for an end to the angstwallow and movement on Draco's part to some modicum of self realization and personal growth. Any hope?

Reviewer: Marcia Signed
Date: Feb 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

still fascinating! wonderful read [in spite of the cliffies...] you would not believe the things I've been late to in order to read the latest chapter! Blessings upon you, Anise.