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Real name: Manu
Registered: Aug 18, 2006
Membership status: Member
Beta-reader: Yes

Beta/ beta-reader/ Avid reviewer, always have a coment about everythign i read, not alwayas nice, but try to be constructive!
=)
I love D/G and romance so i like the fics where in the end everything turns out ok for them. Without one or both dying.

Reviews by choravenclaw

The Enemy of Souls by Jaden Malfoy    (Reviews - 121)

After an unexpected attack on Hogsmeade takes the lives of several loved ones, Ginny Weasley is left with only grief as a remnant of war. But what she never anticipated, in the wake of all the tragedy, was to find her will to live again in the form of a bawling, grey-eyed baby left to die in the wreckage of battle... the baby of Draco Malfoy. REVISED VERSION.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 170678 | Read count: 57155 | Published: Aug 28, 2006 | Updated: Sep 26, 2009
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Seventeen

Queen and royal master of all cliffs!
You are amazing!
I repeat my early statement you should definately get published!
I mean, not only the plot is amazing and keeps us wired, but the cliffs are just OUT OF THIS WORLD AMAZING!
Seriously, i have never seen any author, fic or book, write such amazing cliffs.
I mean to look into a lunatic's eyes and see only craziness, then have to support yourself on a face that looks so much like one you trust but that you know is quite the opposite?
That was GENIUS!!!!
in the beggining i was ansious to read and around the middle i was wrapped up around the whole Draco situation, i thought i was never gonna end!
And then this ending!
Just WOW!!!
Really really incredible!
All hats off for you!

Please tell me the next chater won't take so long to vome out, i'm already going crazy with anticipation!
Thank you so much for posting such an amazing story, i don't even have words to describe it.

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter Eighteen

This was the most beautiful chapter so far!
I loved their reunion
The queen of all cliffs finally got me back up on my feet and got to stop worrying about what would happen to Will and Gin and Draco
I loved this!

For a sec i was so worried when Gin woke up, i thought it was an illusion, tthat everyone was polyjuiced then i was so happy everything was real, i was hanging for most of the chapter, but when they hugged, it was magical, i had tears on my eyes
This was brilliant, beautiful, perfect!
I can't wait to see them going back home with Will
Thank you so ery very much for posting this!
I loved it!
It was worth be up until 2 am!
=D

THANK YOU
THANK YOU
THANK YOU

You're a terrific writer!
Please write more soon!

kisses

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the reunion scene, it was super hard to right because I wanted it to be just right ;) Wow, that would have been creepy if everyone was polyjuiced, though it's an cool idea! Anyway, thanks for the review :) Next chapter should be up tomorrow.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

YES i did!
I loved it!
=D

I was trying not to be too happy about the reunion, the polyjuice was kinda too much, but i didn't wanna get my hopes up!

YAAY!!!
I'll be checking the site every 5 seconds so i don't miss when the chapter comes up
;D

thank you!

kisses

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen

I really am getting repetitive and i hate that but i loved this chapter
every word of it
even when he wouldn't tell her what she wanted to hear, even when the money thing didn't work out
the good, the bad, the ugly, everything!
It's really amazing!
I loved it
i can't stop thanking you everytime i read a word i fall in love more and more with this fic!
it's brilliant
truly amazing
so thank you for writing and posting this!
=D

kisses

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

WOW!
I mean, i'm certainly shocked
not the ending i was waiting (hoping) for
It was a very good ending and i'm indiscribably happy that there's going to be a sequel, but...
THAT'S IT???
they don't get to have the fairytale ending?
like going to the bedroom and the rest of the house, snog quite a lot, find out they are in love, agree on the marriage and not only because of the house, but because they want to be together...and then they would bring Will and he would love the house and they would give him a little sister or brother...

sorry i got too carried away
i was just hoping the ending would be so much biger
tehre was the "definately naughty" part, and that's what made me start reading it, of course the pltting and writing was great, tremenduosly so.
but it could be magestic, and instead it was just...big
i was truly hoping for much much more


anyway, i know you can't, actually WON'T, re-write the ending, but i hope seriously that the sequel will meet the great standards you had set up for this one
this should be immense, but you settled for good
so please make the sequel all that you grew for inn here
because this could be immensily greater but you got smaller withe ending

sorry for the criticism, it's just that, you're too great, too amazing to settle something so simple as this ending
i would have guided you to do it much much bigger
but then again, you have your own beta and ideas, but you could just have dazzled us with something soooo much more wonderful

i'll stop it now, but congratulations even so, it was great to have the implied ending
=D


kisses

Author's Response: Haha, well if I gave them the big fairytale ending in this fic, then what would there be to write about in the sequel? Because there's going to be a sequel, the point of the epilogue, for me, was to set things up, introduce more, rather than to resolve things. So the point was to introduce the idea of them getting married, introduce the idea of them living in that flat, and then maybe in that house. I don't think it's only 'good' or a 'small' ending because they didn't end up married and having another baby already. That would be way too fast. They can't even admit to themselves that they love each other yet, and I want that to be developed well, instead of just a hasty, sudden realization. Because that's not realistic. I don't think endings have to be big and dramatic to be good, in fact, what I love about Draco and Ginny is that they're subtle and unconvential. They're not like your typical couple. I'm glad you think I'm an amazing writer, but I don't think just because it was a simple ending means it was bad. I actually take that as a compliment. Simple was what I was going for. Anyway, point is, don't worry, because there's still lots to happen for them in the sequel!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Anyway, point is, don't worry, because there's still lots to happen for them in the sequel!
Can the sequel be like one of those tv shows?where it will pick up where it left off?
or at least one of them relives the memory of this day?
that would be grand because i love when things like that hapen!
=D

Anyway, i hope it doesn't take too long!
I really do enjoy your writing and it would be sad to go too long without it!


kisses

Author's Response: Nope, it's not going to pick up where it left off, but seriously, it's not a big deal. I mean, this day they spend toegther isn't that special. There will be plenty of scenes like that in the sequel, which should be out later this week.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

=(
pity
i really like complete scenes
i just about go nutters when they just jump like a week, month, or anything!

but it's nice to know it will be up later this week!
=D

i can't wait to see how this goes!

kisses

The Bet by fairgirl    (Reviews - 130)

Draco, Ginny and a bet which will lead them further than they thought...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Non-consensual sex
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 12415 | Read count: 23102 | Published: Sep 28, 2006 | Updated: Jun 02, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Hogsmeade

I've read this bout 15 times and everytim i forget you haven't finished, i think i already said this but could you please, please please keep writing it???
This iw just soo soo sooooooooooooo great!
And i really really wanna see the rest!
*teary eyes*

kisses

Some Things Are Better Left Unsaid by CCC    (Reviews - 163)

Draco suspects Ginny of having an affair.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 8 | Word count: 13694 | Read count: 17340 | Published: Oct 08, 2006 | Updated: Mar 04, 2008
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

you should finish this one too!
it's kinda odd...but in a nice way
i'd like to see hoe it ends
=D

kisses

Playing Games by CCC    (Reviews - 50)

Ginny is a spy for The Order. Can she accomplish her mission, or will Draco trap her in a prison of her own making?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1946 | Read count: 5192 | Published: Nov 25, 2006 | Updated: Nov 25, 2006
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this fic, it's like a passtime reading it, i've read it over and over but i really wish it had changed since the last time, wish there was more
still...amazing fic!
;)

kisses

Last Summer by unknown_force    (Reviews - 7)

One summer, the Weasleys decide to go vacationing in the woods. One freak hurricane carries Draco and Ginny onto a mysterious island and the two are forced to work together for survival. Soon, a friendship grows and develops into something more, but what will they do when they return to Hogwarts and memories from last summer float into their minds as destiny tears them apart?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2230 | Read count: 283 | Published: Jan 06, 2007 | Updated: Jan 06, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Whirlwind Surprises

OOOOOOOOOHHHH
This would definately be an interisting thing to see!
I so wanna know how everyone will react when they find them like this
and will they keep up or will they stop as soon as they realize who the other person is?
hmmm...
questions questions questions

=D
really good fic!

kisses

Duty Bound by LadyRhiyana    (Reviews - 29)

12 years after the war, Draco returns to England for his daughter's sake. Written for Black Alnair on the 2006 dgficexchange.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2950 | Read count: 5831 | Published: Jan 08, 2007 | Updated: Jan 08, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Oct 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW!
Just...WOW
how could you possibly make such a deep, beautiful story into one short chapter?
It was grand!
i don't remember ever seeing anything like this
it Was so amazing!
My eyes have teared up and everythign
i wish we could have it way, way, WAAAAAYYY longer...30 chapters or so
See all it took for them to be together, the friendship, the love and the lovers that grew out of that hand holding, their first touch, kiss, hug, everything
this was beautiful and you should definatelly break it down, like it was a memory playing or sth, this was AMAZINg and it shouldn't be only this small

Still, brilliant story!
Congratulations and thank you for posting it!
=D

kisses

One Taste Is Not Enough by TASHAx    (Reviews - 42)

She understood chocolate, and people. But why couldn’t she understand him? He understood his fiancée. And his life and then she came along. However, one thing they both know is that one taste is not enough.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 8595 | Read count: 1887 | Published: Jan 12, 2007 | Updated: Jan 12, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Sep 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Taste Is Not Enough

i loved this fic from the beggining
it felt wonderful to read
the scene in the kitchen was amazing
i was kinda sad they moved so quickly to the bedroom
and would like some chocolate body parts covering
;)
but it was truly grand
i wish you had done it to continue, not to end there
Draco should meet his child, should be with her
it would be grand
i like the bittersweet end, but prefer the overly sweet one
Can't you be kind enough to wirte and alternatie ending? (with Daphne and the child dying, of ourse)
or atleast a cookie with them being together?
=)

this was amazing!
Really, i love the fics where one of them can cook (and it's not only because i go to gastronomy college)
;)

kisses

Shadow and Soul by Fearthainn    (Reviews - 23)

"I love you as certain dark things are loved, secretly, between the shadow and the soul." Pablo Neruda
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 8313 | Read count: 4557 | Published: Jan 23, 2007 | Updated: Jan 23, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: May 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Shadow and Soul

LOVED IT!
So beautiful!
Will the rest be up soon?
I hope so
GREAT story!
thank you for posting it!

kisses

The Age of Empire by Your Star    (Reviews - 24)

AU Draco, Ginny, an unexpected revolution. Their destinies were fated by the stars. What will happen when they get together? My version of the War. AU
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 3071 | Read count: 2337 | Published: Jan 26, 2007 | Updated: May 01, 2009
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh come on!
That was soooo mean!
I was so wrapped up in the story and then...it's over!
Please write again soon!
it was good so far, although i thought the beggining was a little fast, but that's was nice, because we didn't have to live all the drama
and then this chapter...it was absolutely great to finally see some interection between these two

anyways(sorry but I suck at reviews)...please wirte more soon
it's great and you got me really curious to see who had arrived
=)

I Promise You Walls by alexandriaisariel    (Reviews - 27)

When an unusual alliance forms, the light side holds a chance they didn't have before.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 3935 | Read count: 2469 | Published: Feb 22, 2007 | Updated: Mar 30, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Jun 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Blind As We Are, Watching Everything

*Shinning eyes*
I wanna see more!
Does he get to stay with her for rela?do they get together?
I want more!
and I definately want SMUT!
=D
Loved the way he "surprised" her.
=)
more SOON
kisses

Bits by StrangerWithMyFace    (Reviews - 113)

A rumor about Draco Malfoy is going around Hogwarts and Ginny must discover if there is truth to it. (Formerly titled, Ginny Weasley and the Slytherin's Trouser Snake.)
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 7070 | Read count: 12576 | Published: Apr 02, 2007 | Updated: Apr 02, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Oct 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

There's another, ever so smutty fic, where he ACTUALLY shows her
it was nice to see a sweet, cute side to that one.
=)

kisses

The Proper Usage of a Storage Shed by Mourning Broken Angel    (Reviews - 105)

You know how girlfriends are- they manoeuvre you into doing the stupidest things. That's how I ended up sleeping with Draco Malfoy. Sure, you could say that the actual sleeping part was my fault, but they led me down the path, damn it.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 8316 | Read count: 36923 | Published: May 16, 2007 | Updated: May 21, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

this was the hottest fic i've read on this site, wish we could have more time in that closet so draco could have his beloved anal sex, that would have been sexy as hell...you're an amazing smut writer and i love every second of it
thank you so much for this!


kisses

Becoming An 'Us' by PotterGirl07    (Reviews - 28)

Ginny finds out that Draco wants to talk, he's just never had anyone there to listen.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1076 | Read count: 2133 | Published: May 16, 2007 | Updated: May 16, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. The Beginning

Well, that most certainly can be called the beginning, but where's the part called the rest?
Sorry i'm in a foul moood today

3 hours later...
yeah, i waited 3 hours and now i'm back here again
this is incredibly sweet!
I hope he doesn't become a jerk in the morning, and how the hell does she know hw to get out of slytherin territory?
i really wish you'd wirte more, i can see potential here!
=D

kisses

Vivre by Extreme Dancer    (Reviews - 250)

What do you do when the one you love is no longer there? How do you keep going when you’re left to raise three children by yourself? No character death.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 24473 | Read count: 67125 | Published: May 27, 2007 | Updated: Apr 10, 2012
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Frustration

Ok, so if i'm not insane and i don't have powers to see the future...
i'm pretty sure i've seen this fic here before.
And with a lot more chapters!
What happened?
Did you have to republish it?
WHen are the next chapters showing up?



By the way, i simply love this!
I think in every fic the should have a older boy that is the spitting image of Draco and a couple of childrens that is the perfect mix between Gin and Draco, then a little girl who is exactly like Gin, but behaves as a Cissa!
;D
Yes, i'm perpetually in love with the Malfoys!

=DDD
I can't wait to see what happened to the next chapters and how it will end seeing as last time we didn't get an ending!
^;~


kisses

Author's Response: Haha, no, you're not insane. Read the author's note at the beginning of the chapter, silly; it explains everything :) I love that you love this! Hopefully I can live up to your expectations and make this great!

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Frustration

I read it AFTER seinding the review, because i'm used to seeing the note in the end.
i completely overlooked it!
;P

yep, i completely loved this!
And rewriting isn't always good, but in this case it's a good thing.
I loved everything, but around the end it was getting kinda lost so this was a good thing.
Please don't change the way Draco got back and the children's reaction, from thinking grandpa was so young to being mad, i loved every single one of them!
=DDDD
Please tell me the next chapter is ready and should be out soon!
^;~


kisses

Author's Response: Wow, you remember more from the original than I do! I just went back and reread the chapter where Draco comes back, though, and I promise you I'll leave it the same :) I'll probably add in reactions from a couple other people, but I'll leave Laurie's reaction alone. I definitely can't tell you the next chapter will be out soon :( I'm sorry, I'm a busy college kid! I'll do my best, though.

Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Dec 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Frustration

Hehe!
I do!
i loved this so much!
His reaction to the little one he didn't know about?
I was ACTUALLY crying, not just getting teary eys!
AMAZING!


I understand about college, but i still have to ask you to try to update as much as you can!
;D
I'm just a bugger that way
;P

kisses

Discovery by CCC    (Reviews - 90)

Ginny comes home to an unpleasant discovery.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Crossover
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1135 | Read count: 9244 | Published: Jul 01, 2007 | Updated: Jul 01, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Aug 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Discovery

I was desappointed to say the truth.
I mean, this was obviously going somewhere and then it stopped...i see no fun in something that ends with a twist.
why don't you keep writing it?
It seems like it's gonna be really good.
;)

kisses

Male Bits by Lirie Halliwell    (Reviews - 64)

Draco took upon himself the role of a chastity-belt when it comes to one Miss Weasley. Zealously devoted to his job, perhaps he’d developed the tendency of going a bit too far.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1985 | Read count: 7187 | Published: Jul 06, 2007 | Updated: Jul 06, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: Nov 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Male Bits

15 minute later..i'm till laughing and can't possibly stop
this was great!
absolutely great!
i'm sending it to a bunch of my friend sright now, 'cause this was simply amazing
great way to start anyone's day..or evening as it is, but still...it was really really good!
We should see how the "date" goes, THAT would be simply hilarious!
=D
thank you so much for this!

kisses

Slytherin's Bride by Mynuet    (Reviews - 127)

Ginny Weasley was Draco's ticket out - his way of reaching Dumbledore, getting the Malfoy fortune that he deserved, and leaving the war firmly behind him. Unfortunately, fate had other plans for both of them.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era, Past AU
Genres: Action, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 9433 | Read count: 20759 | Published: Jul 28, 2007 | Updated: Aug 09, 2007
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Reviewer: choravenclaw Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: First Time Lucky

don't leave it unfinished!
please continue!
it was going so great and they are amasingly cute
=)